StoryWeaver13

Perhaps this is revealing too much, but my brother was institutionalized for his depression just today, so a poem like this is lovely to see; it's neither a depressive poem ...

Hey Nightnotes! Well I thought this poem was definitely interesting, if not a little vague. Before I actually review though, can I ask what your first language is? Anyway, I'm ...

Hey guineapiggirl! You reviewed my poem, so I thought I'd return the favor! Honestly, this isn't something that I can "review," really, but I thought that I might as well ...

Hey there, Seastormy! Well I really like the concept and some of the images you've constructed in this poem, but...something...something is lacking. It may be that the rhyme scheme is ...

Hey there! So this really isn't my cup of tea when it comes to style, but even so, this feels a bit too bare. You can get away with writing ...

Hey, Gee! Well this is not too shabby, to say the least. For whatever reason the title itself is quite eye-catching; I have a tendency towards long/rambly/dry/sarcastic titles, and have ...

Hey there! Okay, so as far as concept goes, I think this is great; that being said, it really needs to be cleaned up a lot. Punctuation would be really ...

Hey Cailey! Okay, so I'll start off with the small stuff, and work up from there. "I needed to write something. [[I *had* to write something may be a better ...

Hey, there! I'll try to do a thorough review, but keep in mind that much of my input is often subjective and a matter of opinion. So, take from it ...

Hey, there! Okay, so I'm going to try to do a pretty thorough review, so bear with me. ^_^ "The cold night air cut through the layers of my coat ...

Haha, "dammed." XD Anyway. This was a good poem, and (I believe?) you met all of the extra criteria for the prompt, so kudos! This wasn't an extraordinarily exciting poem, ...

Hey, there! Well, I have quite a lot to say about this piece, so let's take it bit-by-bit, shall we? "Of course you would Do the noble thing." So, I ...

Hey! So I have mixed emotions about this poem, and I'll do my best to explain why. On one hand, you show the potential for a good concept - the ...

Verrryyy intense for sure. At first I wasn't sure that I would like this poem, not feeling particularly intrigued by the opening stanza, but by the end I had shivers ...

She slipped out of her work uniform seductively, letting her white button down slip off her shoulders and her black slacks fall start to the wood floor. [[Get rid of ...