StoneHeart

Hey Noelle! Black here for a Review! Okay, first off: AMAZING WORK! The originality in this piece is stunning and VERY well written, your descriptions are really, really nice, your ...

Hey Neon! Black here for a quick review! Okay, first off, nice work here. Well written, with a really nicely done plot and theme. Great work especially in the theme. ...

Okay, hey salaman! Black here for a Review! Well, I'll give you this! I'd definitely call this a 'dramatic' piece. Your style really does dramatic well! You put everything together ...

Okay, hey Dreamy, Black here for a Review. First off: Nice work. You have a good style, and a good way of writing: I'll give you that for sure! I ...

Until you sharpen and sharpen and sharpen As the last breath escapes my nip you see. its time to say goodbye Thanks for the frivilous times i sigh. Heya RB! ...

Hey ACHU! Black here for a quick Review! First off: Nice work here. You have a good style, a well written theme (One that I agree with for a change), ...

Hay Dannie! Black here for a Review Day Review! Awesome piece you have here! Your wording was very nice, the way you structured the sentence's: Really dramatic! The theme was ...

Hey Anadir, Black here for another Review Day Review! Okay. It appears that that same old problem I pointed out to you in previous reviews is still floating around, the ...

Hey Pegasus! Black here for a Review Day Review! Another. Okay, I'm catching a wisp of intriguing fan-fiction floating around this story. Am I right or am I right? You ...

Hey Sayshi! Black here for a quick Review Day Review! Ok, I'm impressed. Really though, you did a great job here! Your style is really cool and smooth. Your wording ...

Hey Skyler, Black here for a quick review! Okay, so this was good. Well written, with great wording, a fast pace, and an interesting plot. It was hard to follow ...

Hey again Pantig, Black back for another, quick, review day Review! Okay, so nice nonsense poem here! Whew, I'm glad to step, again, off of all the formal writing that ...

Hey Swagmonkey! Black here for another Review, albeit a quick one. Well, I'll give you this: You're improving. But! You still have plenty of room for improvement I'm afraid. Really ...

Hey Pantig, Black here for a Review Day Review! First off: Nice work. When I was your age my writing was . . . abominable. Far worse than this for ...

Hey Dark, Black here for a quick Review Day Review! Okay, so first off. This was great. It was fun, easy going, well written, with good wording, and overall . ...