SpiritedWolfe

Hello there. Saw this in the green room before and I've decided to check this out. And, as I was reading through this, I picked out something that seemed either ...

Hello there. So, first things first. I notice a lot of dialogue in this story, and it seems to me that the story revolves around the dialogue rather than the ...

Hey, Noelle! Look at me being extremely punctual :D So, I'm going to do that comment and read thingy, and my first huge confusion is did Dorrin put the magic ...

Hello there. To be perfectly honest, this is all over the place. I don't know where to start critiquing because I'm not really sure where this was supposed to head. ...

Hello there. Alright then. Quite the interesting piece this is. The descriptions are really lavishing and very descriptive , almost overly so. There is a balance between too little description ...

Hey, Adrian! So, I'm back again to review. See, I'm on track to beat Katya. Very first thing that I notice, and what kind of throws me off, is the ...

Yes! It's in Akia's perspective!!! Hey, Noelle! ^^ I jotted down some places as I was reading through this, so here are my two nitpicks ~ She looked down to ...

Oh, so it appears that the perspective switches around? Interesting. I was only really tipped off by the fact that the narrator call out Dave, so it seems like there ...

Hey again, Dark! This was a quite nice chapter, with all the nice making up-ness between Dave and Mandy (Mindy?) and you do a really great job getting into Dave's ...

Hey, Dark! Sorry that I'm coming in a little late, but I'll do my best to leave an insightful review though I have not read previous parts. So, I'll probably ...

Hey, Utopia! First sentence in there and I've already gotten a thought. Remind me what the Pengwing is again? I feel like it was mentioned recently, but maybe elaborate on ...

Hey, Utopia! Oh, so it seems that everything is starting to come together, slowly but surely. They got this pod and are sailing away (somewhat safely, as they are still ...

Hey, Utopia! I have not forgotten about this! To let you know now, I will not be looking at the previous reviews, so there may be some points that I ...

Hey, Cynder! Here as requested. So I think one thing which really throws me off is the lack of stanzas within this. As I'm sure you know, they are usually ...

Hey, Rocket! I seem to be all caught up ~ Now, before I move on the reading chapter 12, I'm going to talk about 11. To be perfectly honest, I ...