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Re: Gathering the Flurries (chapter 1 edit)
@alliyah
Jul 1, 2023 -
Re: Chapter One
The tensing issue is an ongoing issue for me lol. I am attempting to keep working that out but mistakes do slip. I also do plan to add in a ...
Mar 16, 2020 -
Re: Prologue
Thanks for the review. To be honest this is my first attempt at writing in a few years. I'm still figuring it out myself! I appreciate the feedback and will ...
Oct 2, 2019 -
Re: Frozen Honor Chapter 1 Part 1-LMS Week 1
That fox is important so XD
Feb 13, 2017 -
Re: Petals of an Arctic Flower-Prologue
The Healing is actually very important that will be noticed as the story progresses. But I'm glad you liked it.
Jul 13, 2015 -
Re: Unsilenced War-Chapter 3
I am so sorry Scarlett O.o Chapter two had been drafted and not published...odd. But its up now!
Sep 28, 2014 -
Re: Darkman's Hour: Prologue
Haha, I see. And your welcome. You've peaked my interest very much with this!
Sep 27, 2014 -
Re: Roses Dyed by Blood
Thanks Cypher and I posted it because I had planned to make it the first chapter but when I finished posting it I realized I would have to add more ...
Oct 17, 2013 -
Re: Seven For A Secret - Part 1
That's okay
Feb 19, 2013 -
Re: The Surprisingly Functional Family
Thank you Aria xD Honestly I didn't know what to write for this and so this will be edited once I'm not pressured so much by school and college to ...
Jan 26, 2013 -
Re: Drackel Chapter One: Rewritten
Well, I had enough trouble writing just this as it was. I'm planning to get my plot outlined in some shape before I go back. Writing this took forever...having problems ...
Aug 21, 2012 -
Re: Alexandra - Chapter 1
I like this very much so my only decision would be to separate paragraphs to be easier read but nonetheless very well done! Hope everything works out well and I ...
May 6, 2012 -
Re: Path of Shattered Lies: Will of the Kastha
Second chapter is posted on the right in the "Related Items" ^^
Apr 7, 2012 -
Re: Consequences of Unforgivens
Thanks Joker ^^ and Welcome to Young Writers! Hope you like it and I'm glad you enjoyed it XD
Mar 8, 2012 -
Re: Tortured Smiles
Teen! This was wonderfully sad and beautiful and I must sincerely say it was amazing! So glad I could read it and I didn't notice anything off, as I'm not ...
Feb 13, 2012
