Soulkana

Hi Soul here! So I haven't reviewed anything in ages, let alone poetry, but I will say this much, I really like this. Brought back a lot of memories and ...

Hi Scarlett! So second part!! Eesh, no wonder you had to split it. It's sooooo long! Anyways I loved it just as much as the first part of the chapter. ...

Hi Spark! First off, cap the I's! They're so small without their cappings! Anyways this was nice and short but still drove the message clearly and with emotion! It reminds ...

Hi Ane! Well I loved your poem. It definitely grabs the attention of the readers. It gives a rather clear message of how people, especially teenagers and young adults, feel ...

Hi Scarlett! So, I loved this! I enjoyed how you portrayed everything and it flows so very well together! However, I think you could have put more thoughts into this. ...

Hi Scarlett! Well I have to say that I got really hooked into this. As opposed to the first review, I can tell why you mentioned the weather/time. It's important ...

Hi Ranay, First off, this was very emotional and beautifully written. However, you should remember to cap the I's and to be consistent with capping your lines. The poem bounces ...

Hi Ella! So I really liked this story. You kept the reader's in suspension very well. It kept me wanting to read more and to find out more. I want ...

Hi Ben! Well you definitely know how to draw someone in for sure! After reading the italics, I knew I would have to keep reading because my curiosity was peaked. ...

Hi Kelpies! I must say I find this poem very interesting. I like the analogies used to describe how your person doesn't hurt. It also makes me understand the character ...

Hi Avalon! I loved your poem, by the way. The emotion it shows is very strong. It's true though. There's always two sides to a story. While one person's happiness ...

Hiya Kat! Interesting plot you got going on! It brings up so many questions for me. Who are the Council of Light and why is your MC so distrustful of ...

Hi Auro! So my first question is: Why is Xavier called Zave?" I just got really confused about it but besides that I find myself really wanting to know more ...

Hi Isuki and Anon! I'm here to review this lovely piece of yours both! I very much loved it. It brings out a lot of emotion and I can see ...

Hi Kat! To start off I really loved this poem! It's very interesting and tells a rather intriguing tale. I find myself wanting to know more about these silver wolves? ...