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  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: Fire Alarm

    Hey there, Sofie here with a review :) Well, I'm definitely laughing out loud at the imagery of you running around the room while a fire alarm is going off. ...

    Mar 2, 2022
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: I was Late to Work Today

    Hey there, It's Sofie with a review :) Wow, this poem is short, but packed such a powerful punch. In just a few short lines, you manage to capture the ...

    Mar 2, 2022
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Curiosity

    Hey there, Sofie here with a review :) I love this poem! It's quirky with a nice little message. I love how you kind of walk the reader through how ...

    Nov 28, 2021
  • Article / Essay » Realistic, General Re: Application Essay

    Hey there! I think you did a really good sticking to the point and illustrating why this instance proves your skills in resolving disagreements. I really like your final paragraph ...

    Nov 11, 2021
  • Poetry » Literature, Dramatic Re: stranger

    Hey there! Sofie here with a review. I thought this piece was really moving. I think you captured a feeling that a lot of us can relate to. I especially ...

    May 22, 2020
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Fantasy Re: Anger

    Hey Quitecontrary! Sofie here with a review :) Wow. I really love this piece. I think the metaphor of the wilting rose is such a brilliant idea and makes for ...

    May 22, 2020
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: The Last Step

    Hey Shadeflame! Sofie here with a review :) I think you write with a really nice, poetic voice. Every line was lyrical and pretty. I especially like the line... "like ...

    May 22, 2020
  • Short Story » General, General Re: i wonder (may have turned into me just missing my family and crying while typing and changing names)

    Hello! Sofie here :) I love how relatable this is! "The plane ride was more than enough to suffice" really cracked me up, lol. You've clearly been through a lot, ...

    Dec 28, 2019
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: A Christmas Carol Short

    Hey there! Sofie here with a review :) So, if this is indeed a school assignments, there area few revisions I would definitely recommend making. First, you do use a ...

    Jun 10, 2019
  • Short Story » Narrative, Spiritual Re: Sight

    Hey there! Sofie here with a review. :) Great job on this! I like the different points of view. I think playing with point of view like that is a ...

    May 26, 2019
  • Article / Essay » Spiritual, General Re: To Fill a Glass to the Rim with Water

    Hey there! Sofie here with a review. :) So, I really really enjoy this metaphor of the glass of water. This is one of those pieces where, no two readers ...

    May 26, 2019
  • Article / Essay » Culture, Realistic Re: An Explanation

    Hey there! This was quite the interesting read. That line about how we only really express half our anger really hit me hard.. I have been doing that my entire ...

    May 24, 2019
  • Article / Essay » Humor, Dramatic Re: Why, Internet?

    Hey there, Sofie here with a review :) I enjoyed reading this poem immensely. It's fun, lighthearted, and, I think, very relatable to a lot of people in our generation. ...

    May 24, 2019
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Fighter and the Dragon

    Wow, I am really impressed. It's once thing to write. It's a whole other thing to write in a foreign language. That takes patience and discipline that I can't imagine. ...

    Oct 5, 2018
  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, Narrative Re: My Diary - Young Sufragette

    Hey Carlak2003! Sofie here with a review. Firstly, I really adore the choice of writing this in the diary format. I think it's a really cool way to get inside ...

    Oct 5, 2018


Journeys end in lovers' meeting.
— William Shakespeare