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Re: Fire Alarm
Hey there, Sofie here with a review :) Well, I'm definitely laughing out loud at the imagery of you running around the room while a fire alarm is going off. ...
Mar 2, 2022 -
Re: I was Late to Work Today
Hey there, It's Sofie with a review :) Wow, this poem is short, but packed such a powerful punch. In just a few short lines, you manage to capture the ...
Mar 2, 2022 -
Re: Curiosity
Hey there, Sofie here with a review :) I love this poem! It's quirky with a nice little message. I love how you kind of walk the reader through how ...
Nov 28, 2021 -
Re: Application Essay
Hey there! I think you did a really good sticking to the point and illustrating why this instance proves your skills in resolving disagreements. I really like your final paragraph ...
Nov 11, 2021 -
Re: stranger
Hey there! Sofie here with a review. I thought this piece was really moving. I think you captured a feeling that a lot of us can relate to. I especially ...
May 22, 2020 -
Re: Anger
Hey Quitecontrary! Sofie here with a review :) Wow. I really love this piece. I think the metaphor of the wilting rose is such a brilliant idea and makes for ...
May 22, 2020 -
Re: The Last Step
Hey Shadeflame! Sofie here with a review :) I think you write with a really nice, poetic voice. Every line was lyrical and pretty. I especially like the line... "like ...
May 22, 2020 -
Re: i wonder (may have turned into me just missing my family and crying while typing and changing names)
Hello! Sofie here :) I love how relatable this is! "The plane ride was more than enough to suffice" really cracked me up, lol. You've clearly been through a lot, ...
Dec 28, 2019 -
Re: A Christmas Carol Short
Hey there! Sofie here with a review :) So, if this is indeed a school assignments, there area few revisions I would definitely recommend making. First, you do use a ...
Jun 10, 2019 -
Re: Sight
Hey there! Sofie here with a review. :) Great job on this! I like the different points of view. I think playing with point of view like that is a ...
May 26, 2019 -
Re: To Fill a Glass to the Rim with Water
Hey there! Sofie here with a review. :) So, I really really enjoy this metaphor of the glass of water. This is one of those pieces where, no two readers ...
May 26, 2019 -
Re: An Explanation
Hey there! This was quite the interesting read. That line about how we only really express half our anger really hit me hard.. I have been doing that my entire ...
May 24, 2019 -
Re: Why, Internet?
Hey there, Sofie here with a review :) I enjoyed reading this poem immensely. It's fun, lighthearted, and, I think, very relatable to a lot of people in our generation. ...
May 24, 2019 -
Re: The Fighter and the Dragon
Wow, I am really impressed. It's once thing to write. It's a whole other thing to write in a foreign language. That takes patience and discipline that I can't imagine. ...
Oct 5, 2018 -
Re: My Diary - Young Sufragette
Hey Carlak2003! Sofie here with a review. Firstly, I really adore the choice of writing this in the diary format. I think it's a really cool way to get inside ...
Oct 5, 2018
