Snoops

first of all: WELCOME! *throws confetti* second of all: I love this and cant wait to read more. I really want to know whats going to happen and who "him" ...

I know that feeling, my sister does the same to me. She drives me crazy! I love her...but she drives me crazy! Shes always trying to blackmail me in buying ...

Hey greenlight! I liked the repetetion. Gives it a nice mood...more scenerio, anyway. I liked it. Final point. Sorry, I ramble. :). You keep saying "or", it makes it poetic. ...

Lau here for a review! Yes! Yes! Yes! I loved this! It was perfect. I'm writting one about an angel too. There is a little past tense thing that wonderwoman ...

I laughed a lot at this. If this really happened...you have some bad luck strange..just saying. If not, how did you come up with this? Lesson to learn here. Dont ...

Lau here for a review! I liked this a lot. The whole angry beggining to the self conclusion, was perfect. I'm not the person to help you gramaticly, sorry. But ...

Lau here for a review! I really liked this, maybe you could make a Poem out of this? If you do, please PM me. I would love to hear it. ...

Lau here for a review! That was beautiful. I used to ride and it felt like the horse just knew, simply knew. The poem was great and simple. Stress and ...

Hi. Lau here with a comment, no review ( to great for a review ) I love this! Can you do more of these lines? It was intense and stood ...

Hi there! I liked this a lot. It went smootly and it showed alot of emotion. I don't know if this was a typo or not, so I'm just leaving ...

You made me smile the whole time i read this. What beauty. I loved how smooth it went, real poetry. Tell me how you do it! I need to know. ...

Eu falo português. Discordo contigo, nós temos muita liberdade. Não só somos controladas pela tecnologia se nos deixamos ser. Faz o teu caminho, e vives na tua liberdade própria. Portugal ...

Wauw. This was so heart warming. I wonder what happened to them, I don't know if you wantednto leave that as a question. It does leave a good question and ...

Wauw. The narration seemed so lifeless, like he had given up on everything. No joy, nor happiness. Just a voice speaking. I don't know what happened to Jun, maybe he ...

Hi eros! I would suggest editing a few things. First thing put the I in capslocks, I had problems with that too, so don't worry. Remember to put spaces between ...