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Re: 1. Expectations
*Claps* Wow! This was good, like really good. I read threw it twice to find some things wrong and all I could come up with is maybe add some description ...
Jul 18, 2015 -
Re: Normal or Unique?: Chapter 1
Hello! I liked this a lot. Has a variety of characters and room for a cool plot. I know something is going to go wrong. My question is what? Will ...
Jul 17, 2015 -
Re: Perfection ( EDITED)
Hello Rose! Perfection...interresting... This is a hard topic to talk about, but you handled it nicely. It was shirt, which I thought was a shame, prolong it. Tell me more. ...
Jul 8, 2015 -
Re: Autotune Penguin Rap (?)
IronKnee? I love you! This is perfect. For the fact that it has penguins and because it makes no sense at all! We need more penguin raps... *Starts to plot ...
Jul 8, 2015 -
Re: Ugly Duckling
Hello Mad! First of all: Welcome to the YWS kingdom. second of all: Great work on this, the tittle fit perfectly and drew my attention. Third of all: A few ...
Jul 8, 2015 -
Re: Homeless Connections - Introduction
Hello! Lau here for a review! I like this piece a lot, I especially want to complement you on this line. "But at the end of the day it is ...
Jul 8, 2015 -
Re: Let Me In
Hello! First of all: SHIVERS! Seond of all: Why would they stay in the house? Are they stupid? I would pack my bags the day the flowes seemed angry! But, ...
Jul 8, 2015 -
Re: My Question To The Pseudo-Feminists
Feminism. Feminism. Feminism. In my opnion, this is one of the biggest issues we have at the moment. Everything has a different view point. I am a feminist, and I ...
Jun 30, 2015 -
Re: Chilled Bones - The Introduction I
Hello Dangerousoverlord! First of all: Bravo! The whole story I couldn't help but smile at how great and terrifying this was. The whole story made me shiver and happy. A ...
Jun 28, 2015 -
Re: A Scale of Power- Chapter Two
This was great, well done. This certainly builds up tension, and please PM me when you update the story, okay? Thank you. A few tiny details I want to tell ...
Jun 21, 2015 -
Re: Give A little more Take a little less
Hello! I'm Lau, here to review! First of all: welcome to YWS. It is great here, dont worry. Second of all: Nicely done, I love the idea and I think ...
Jun 18, 2015 -
Re: Trees
Hey Dreamer. After reading monsters, I needed to see some more work of yours! This was so sad and painfull, the ending was perfect. It gave it a hopeless touch. ...
Jun 18, 2015 -
Re: Monsters
hey dreamer! I'm here for give a review! or try my best!First of all, I loved this. Short, but nicely done. Great job! Maybe you could add a descrition of ...
Jun 18, 2015 -
Re: Surviving the Zombie Apocalypse
Here for a review ( I am not very good at them, so bare with me ). This made me laugh so much and of course it was very informative. ...
Jun 18, 2015 -
Re: Face it
welll, this was quite unexpected...I loved it! I didnt expect it at all, up untill the point suzie got kidnapped by Angela, and then the mask part was gruesome. great ...
Jun 6, 2015
