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Re: The Puzzle Called Love
Hi! I adore Jerry Spinelli. I mean, I read every single book of his that I could get my hands on. But one of the reasons why I loved them ...
Nov 21, 2013 -
Re: What!?
XD BUT. BUT. RHYMING POEMS ARE AWESOME. Oh, fine. Believe what you must! *cries* Anyway, I will critique it, just because I must. Babble you might, about my syllables and ...
Nov 19, 2013 -
Re: A Need for Hope
Hi! This is actually pretty good! And, because we all love lists, I will tell you what I liked about it! 1. It uses vivid imagery that includes characterization and ...
Nov 19, 2013 -
Re: Stand Strong
PFFT. With Christ by our side, we can't fall. In fact, He takes away our sins so that we can rise above! ;) So, I didn't realize that this was ...
Nov 19, 2013 -
Re: Why Does My Name Start With an M and end with an R?
When I first read the title, I was like, "Oh, this is a poem about a mother!" Then I saw that it was in "Horror" and I was like, "Oh, ...
Nov 19, 2013 -
Re: An Older Woman's Regret
Hi! First of all, thank you for posting this! It's really good. I read somewhere that a good poem is one that changes where you stand on things, and this ...
Nov 6, 2013 -
Re: Ask Me Why
...you probably shouldn't say "the right to marry whom they love." I know several people who are polyamorous, and they are frustrated in the lack of legal options that are ...
Oct 22, 2013 -
Re: Ensnaring Traps of Technology
Hi! As requested... So, first of all, I am a scientist, so I am definitely up to date of technical reports! So, never fear! I am not reading this with ...
Oct 3, 2013 -
Re: Poetry Has Never Been For Me
Hi WritersCanDream77! So! The poem is interesting! I will start with what's good about it, because we all like praise, and then I'll give you tips how to make it ...
Sep 29, 2013 -
Re: story success
What an intriguing idea! I really like this premise. There are so many people who "see" different parts of society and whatnot that others are blind to (like, sexism, racism, ...
Sep 29, 2013 -
Re: Beastie (Chapter 1)
What a cute story! Here is a video critique, as you requested! First one! Second one! ...yeah, I was silly and forgot to add a part, so it's two parts. ...
Sep 13, 2013 -
Re: Hold Me Down
Teehee! Okay, when I first saw this, I was thinking, "Really? This is a bit short..." But then I read it and I laughed. It is true... hopes do grow ...
Sep 12, 2013 -
Re: Beautiful.
Hi, darkknight! I am going to be annoying and point out a grammar error, because I am totally a prose writer like that! There's a beautiful things
Sep 12, 2013 -
Re: Sunset
Hey Wonder! :) I suppose dawn is drab, but then again, twilight is also drab! However, there is sunrise, just as there is sunset, and sunrise can be startling beautiful. ...
Sep 12, 2013 -
Re: The Last Late Night
Yay! I love happy endings! Happy endings to drug abuse stories make me even happier! After all, who wouldn't want to have a successful recovery? This is a good thing! ...
Sep 12, 2013
