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Hi bee! :) I actually don't like this poem? I think it looks at sex with an incredibly narrow scope that doesn't quite capture the truth about sex or pregnancy ...

Hi! This is going to be quick, but I just wanted to tell you how cute and awesome this poem was. I could hear Smeagol saying the words and everything ...

Hi MarySue! And welcome to YWS. :) I don't know whether you need this prologue? I mean, it's interesting because she has her feet in two different worlds. Cool! And ...

Hi! I adore Jerry Spinelli. I mean, I read every single book of his that I could get my hands on. But one of the reasons why I loved them ...

XD BUT. BUT. RHYMING POEMS ARE AWESOME. Oh, fine. Believe what you must! *cries* Anyway, I will critique it, just because I must. Babble you might, about my syllables and ...

Hi! This is actually pretty good! And, because we all love lists, I will tell you what I liked about it! 1. It uses vivid imagery that includes characterization and ...

PFFT. With Christ by our side, we can't fall. In fact, He takes away our sins so that we can rise above! ;) So, I didn't realize that this was ...

When I first read the title, I was like, "Oh, this is a poem about a mother!" Then I saw that it was in "Horror" and I was like, "Oh, ...

Hi! First of all, thank you for posting this! It's really good. I read somewhere that a good poem is one that changes where you stand on things, and this ...

...you probably shouldn't say "the right to marry whom they love." I know several people who are polyamorous, and they are frustrated in the lack of legal options that are ...

Hi! As requested... So, first of all, I am a scientist, so I am definitely up to date of technical reports! So, never fear! I am not reading this with ...

Hi WritersCanDream77! So! The poem is interesting! I will start with what's good about it, because we all like praise, and then I'll give you tips how to make it ...

What an intriguing idea! I really like this premise. There are so many people who "see" different parts of society and whatnot that others are blind to (like, sexism, racism, ...

What a cute story! Here is a video critique, as you requested! First one! Second one! ...yeah, I was silly and forgot to add a part, so it's two parts. ...

Teehee! Okay, when I first saw this, I was thinking, "Really? This is a bit short..." But then I read it and I laughed. It is true... hopes do grow ...