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Overall, I like what you did here with this story. :) It was interesting and fun to read. I have a few suggestions and critiques though. For one, I noticed ...

Wow.. I really, really do like this one a lot. But you've heard this all before in the other posts I'm sure! I read them. You're readers are very moved ...

Hey :) I agree with Jojo. If you edited the way she suggested I think you would have a way better poem. You're poem is great, it just needs a ...

No need to worry about the dust and the cobwebs! This was a pretty neat little piece here. The simplicity in it was what I admired most. How you were ...

Hello CS :) I'm here to do a little review for you, since I already love your work. Well actually, this time I will do a thorough one. This way ...

I like this a lot. It's cute. I find it awesome that you found inspiration in Spongebob.That is deep :) I like these two lines a lot. The opening and ...

Hello poetic glow :) I'm here to review this for you. I think this poem was a great piece. The title was nice. I especially liked this part: Like a ...

Hey, this was a very cool piece to read. I totally get the idea behind this poem. I too hate writers block! It's almost like you're waiting for your own ...

Hello, It's Smylin' here :) Just going to throw a quick review at you for this poem. I have only a few things to critique. First off, this part here: ...

I liked this poem. It evoked your thoughts clearly and effortlessly. One thing I must point out to you is this last line: I Am loney and noone stands in ...

This was cute and short, and I think I understand your title now. :) I have two minor things that caught my eye that I can easily recall. One at ...

This was pretty great. Your last lines were strong and stuck in just the right way. Good closing lines always seem to do the job in carrying the direction of ...

Hello :) Might I say this was very capturing to read. I love how you have ties to religious upbringing. It's something I can always appreciate. And the way you ...

This was a very sweet poem I think. I feel as though the two other reviewers above me have beat me to the punch when it comes to critiques for ...

Wow, this was some beautiful short story. Really, fantastic job! I am not one to go all nit-picky when I see excellent work in front of me. There is no ...