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This seems like quite a personal poem. It looks on life from quite a depressing point of view. The description of the way you see people and things through the ...

Hey yubbies. I think this is a good description of a battle fighting scene, it can be quite hard to get an accurate account of everything that goes on in ...

A very dark topic. Takes a person to be in quite a dark mood to write a poem such as this! I like the imagery in this, the description of ...

Hey Lyla. This is a really good poem. The rhyming works great as well has everything having a meaning. The only thing I thought was vague was the "I sit ...

I'll start with the rhythm. It doesn't seem to flow very well and seems very disjointed. Ending s sentence with a connective doesn't have a very good effect and can ...

This seems like quite a powerful poem, and had some though put into it. I don't quite understand the first line, and what its intention is to portray, whilst all ...

Are you aware of the comical phrases "Herp" and "Derp"? I found this a rather amusing poem to read, more than amusing in fact. But that aside its quite a ...

This is quite a different and unique way of writing. The way things are randomized is quite a weird thing to read, things that you wouldn't expect. "She has some ...

This seems like quite a heartfelt thought. At first it seems literate and thought through. But by then end you are just speaking your mind. People are different, some more ...

I'll go in order. i. I really like this one, it speaks the truth and very poetically, I think its brilliant. I think it impacts me though because it has ...

Quite an impacting poem. I though the message was sent across clear enough and that it had a deeper meaning. I got the sense that the 2 characters were siblings, ...

Very true for a start! I think the concept of having writers blocked is put across quite effectively to a certain extent. I liked the comparison of the twiddling of ...

I quite like this piece of writing. I like the comparison between anguish and love, showing how there may be a link between the 2 emotions. The imagery that came ...

The opening sentence grabs your attention. It makes you think 'what is she/he hiding from?'. I can't seem to make sense of the 'love' and the 'honey'. I'm assuming that ...

This seems like the foreshadow of the war in Poland in World War 2. But with more depth. What I like about this is the description and the way you've ...