SilverKnight007

Hey there, Silver at your service. I'll be reviewing your chapter. First, I'd like to congratulate you for commencing a story. Welcome to YWS! Ok, so the plot that you ...

Wow! Just wow! This poem is an incredibly deep-seated piece of nostalgia. It is in a sort of letter-format from a proud mother to her beloved daughter. The poem journeys ...

Wow! Just wow! This poem is an incredibly deep-seated piece of nostalgia. It is in a sort of letter-format from a proud mother to her beloved daughter. The poem journeys ...

Hey! SilverKnight007 at your service! Nope, just kidding... I am here to review your poem. Personally, I have never had the pleasure of owning a dog, and I used to ...

Hey! I'm here to review your poem. So, to start with, your punctuation and grammar was spot on! Congrats on that! But the message is really just not clear. I ...

Hey! I'm SilverKnight007, at your service (well, not really, but you get the point). I'm here to review your wonderful poem. First off, your punctuation, grammar and spellings are BANG ...

Okay... So I am here to review this article. The starting of the essay was smart, because you used a definition to clear doubts. But from then on, the essay ...

Love, faith and rediscovering oneself is the main theme of this beautifully written poem. The message of love and longing is loud and clear. The words flow out easily, as ...

Wow!! This poem is dripping with emotion, guilt and love. It shows the sorrow of a child when he/she discovers that they are adopted. It's painful (from what I've heard) ...

'Ball of String' has insight and its metaphorical semblances to 'life and its ups and downs' are appealing. The poem is not a rhyme but finds a way to be ...

'Dear Mommy' has a very nostalgic touch and sends you into an awe-struck oblivion. Mothers are the most precious gems of mankind and we don't respect, revere and cherish them ...

This poem describes a monotonous life which becomes boring, dull and uninteresting because of constant reminders of repetition. Progress makes life interesting but without something to keep us on the ...

This article left me heavy-hearted but I have to ask the author how it is known to them how God feels. Also the article could have had more substance and ...

Beautiful words, amazing imagination, awesome thought and effort!! Good job JasmineC!! You have fared well. I would like to point out a few slip-ups that could be omitted or edited ...

This poem invokes feelings like never before. It's short, concise, and to-the-point nature affects and actually makes an impact on the reader. The poem draws attention in a sense of ...