Shine

Music’s Only Survival Tactic The song unwritten, that’s what it was. A tune never struck to a guitar or drum and words never emphasized with a lead’s passion. Piles of ...

Good job Don Quixote. Only one thing I would like to say is that in this line Together, We gave truth our all. truth our all?I didn't get that place. ...

Phorcys wrote:Then you review it before posting. Simple. No excuses please lol Ooo... we really have a strict teacher here,lol. :wink:

Another of your short good poem! :P I liked the way it started. Just one small thing, that in this para: That's for you do decide. To believe in what ...

I've just started writing haikus so I am not an expert in it.I'll try to give my opinions on this. I like the haiku on water. Searing inferno The light ...

Your first effort was a good try. Try using some rhyming words.Try to put some rythme into ur makes ur poem sound good. I liked the way the poem ended. ...

They say that they will help you When you shall be in need, They say that they will aid you, If you just ask, if you just call. You smile, ...

Hey Samarah! First of all welcome to the site. The starting of the poem was nice compared to the rest of it. From the third para the poem was confusing ...

Hey Samar! Welcome to the site. :D That was a nice poem,but I felt the rhyming was forced. Take an axe And cut me deep Cut me cut me Till ...

This was good,Well done! sometimes when i am alone, i smash photo frames and mirrors and glasses and use the glass to cut the skin between my fingers, just to ...

I enjoyed it! that was a short and nice poem. Like the wind I fly I will not ever die Like the wind I howl My face frozen in a ...

First of all welcome to the site! whatever i would have liked to see a better title. To talk about the poem starting is nice. Though more puntuations in the ...

That was no doubt an interesting poem to write on death. I am just death. I think it would have done without the word 'just'. What is not mine. I ...

My love for you both wakes me up lets me start anew, as at the same time you drift asleep, recollecting yourselves to wake up in a few hours once ...

I think this is a great start. So much full of emotions, feelings and everything. This is really going to work. It can make a great story book or something. ...