Published November 11, 2006
Here's one of my newer poems, hope you enjoy!
Like the wind I wander
Into a darkened yonder
Like the wind I cry
Into a deep dark sky
Like the wind I travel
My tale of woe unravels
Like the wind I fly
I will not ever die
Like the wind I howl
My face frozen in a scowl
Like the wind I inquire
Is there a being higher
Like the wind I wander
Into a darkened yonder
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A little angsty, but I like it. It had a very lost, mournful tone. I like the repetition and the wind simile.
A nice poem. The rhyming wasn't forced and i really liked this, very effective on the reader
yep. . . i was kinda depressed and put it on my school binder. . .
hmm..no doubt u have put it in ur siggy,it is good.
yeah, my favorite stanza is the first one. . .
I enjoyed it!
that was a short and nice poem.
i felt the last two lines to be a bit confusing.
Keep writing