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Shady

"you really do have the diet of a 7 year old with a liquor license" ~ Atticus

  • Lyrics » Horror, Horror Re: Carol of the Zombies

    Hey Alf! I'm here to return one of the many favors you've given me! :) ...though...I don't review many I'm not really sure how to go about it. One thing ...

    Dec 25, 2012
  • Poetry » Romantic, Narrative Re: Dear Future Lover

    Hey Ember! Wow. This is really good! It really presents the feelings of all of us who have been a lover someone, when the love wasn't meant to be. How ...

    Dec 25, 2012
  • Poetry » Romantic, Lyrical Re: Helicopter

    Hey Dream! Shady here with your review! :) It's an interesting poem that you've got here. I love poems that are based around non-typical subjects (like helicoptors, instead of roses). ...

    Dec 25, 2012
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Dramatic Re: Sleeping Beauty

    Hey Macy! Here with a review for your wonderful poem! :D I agree with Ice, I wanted to wake her. ~ This feels a bit too incomplete, short. b raved ...

    Dec 25, 2012
  • Poetry » Culture, Humor Re: Jolly Christmas

    Hey Ary! Aw, this is so sweet! I the brevity of it. Just four short stanzas, yet you've clearly presented your view of Christmas. It's wonderful. My only complaints are: ...

    Dec 25, 2012
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Original Masterpiece

    Hey Triple X! My reviews tend to be mostly techincal/ grammatical, so forgive me if this gets a bit long or tedious... It's not going to work, Your ~ 'it's' ...

    Dec 23, 2012
  • Poetry » Spiritual, General Re: That Bird

    Hey Ash! This is a really sweet thought. I love the imagery that you use here- sweet and hopeful, yet chilling at the same time. I love how the bird ...

    Dec 23, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Narrative Re: Rovaalian. Prologue: the beginning.

    Hey Rirr! Here with the review you requested. :) A quick warning: I only skim-read other reviews, but I noticed that you mentioned that the solely grammatical tendancy of thier ...

    Dec 23, 2012
  • Short Story » Supernatural, Narrative Re: Inhumanity.

    Here with your review, as requested. :) But, what if I do not feel human . What if I feel more, or what if I feel less . ~ These ...

    Dec 20, 2012
  • Article / Essay » Narrative, Culture Re: Boromir

    Hey Egs! Here with your review, as requested. :D Boromir has shown me that actions ~Typo, 'has shown', not 'shown'. I'm not sure I like the 'Maybe I should have ...

    Dec 20, 2012
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: The Fart

    Hey Abel! I can honestly say that I've never reviewed a piece about farts before...but I suppose there's a first time for everything, right? xD I am by no means ...

    Dec 17, 2012
  • Article / Essay » Realistic, Other Re: Are We humans! Can humans ask for their rights !!

    Hey Alk! I agree with the other reviewer- if you space this differently, it would make for an easier read. As for the rest of your review, I'm going to ...

    Dec 17, 2012
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Fanfiction Re: The Bastard Child

    Hey Hobbit! ;) I don't review poetry very often, but I'm trying to get into the rythm, so here I am with an attempted review... You watch the one who ...

    Dec 17, 2012
  • Short Story » Other, General Re:

    Hey Katlyn! This review might end up being a bit tedious, since grammar and spelling is my specialty, but...oh well, here goes... refigerator ~ Refrigerator "I'm not going to lie ...

    Dec 17, 2012
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Other Re: The Tunnel

    Hey Boyan! Here with a review for you tonight! :D My reviewing style tends to rip pieces apart into tiny shreds and critique them line-by-line, adding thoughts when they come ...

    Dec 17, 2012


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