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Hey! Maddie here with a poetry review for you! I'm gonna say this is an interesting concept, I've never thought about using such an innocent thing like a doll to ...

Hey! Maddie here with a poetry review for you! "trickling through consciousness as not even a droplet" -This literally stopped me from reading further because this is really awkwardly written. ...

Holy Hell, that was intense. I really like the imagery of this piece. It flows very well from scene to scene, switching from a barren landscape to a hospital room ...

Hello! Maddie here to give a poetry review for you! I like the concept of this piece. My only issue honestly is that it's hard to get into this work. ...

Oh damn, that ending! Hi, Maddie here with a poetry review! First and foremost, I must say this is a very interesting metaphor. What I'm getting from this narration is ...

Damn... just damn Ok, so...ugh, I have many things I could say. I'm going to assume that this is based on real life events, and if that is true, I'm ...

Hi! Maddie here with a poetry review for you! Right off the bat I'm gonna say that I really enjoy the concept. I don't think I've ever really seen any ...

Hello! Maddie here with a lovely poetry review! Joy and joyness XDD I love the simplicity of this poem. The way you went about this gives the piece a type ...

Ello, Maddie here for a poem review! First off, welcome to YWS! I hope you like it here! I love the fact that you actually incorporated the line from Hamlet ...

Ello there, Maddie here for a poem review! Right off the bat I have one thing to say to you; kudos. It takes a lot to get me into a ...

Well then, that was not a happy tale. I will say that I was impressed that I didn't know where exactly you were going with the narrative. I thought at ...

Holy Hell. That got so dark, I mean I thought I was dark in my writing. But in comparison to this, I mean holy crap, I got emotional freaked out. ...

Why are there comas? Like seriously, those make no grammatical or rhythmical sense at all. If you're trying to separate, just move it down to the next line. No one ...

Uh . . . what? I have literally no idea what you are talking about. I'm guessing you're talking about something Indian, but unfortunately, the majority of people outside of ...

Wow. . . . I mean, wow. Ok, so, I'm going to do my best to critique this, but honestly, I'm not sure what to say. There is so much ...