SamanthaSchumer

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Hello there First, I would like to point out that this is a beautiful poem! IT has a lost of emotion behind every line. I would like to sugest something,,, ...

Hello:) This is a short peice, maybe writen out of anger? at least personal experience? I don't know if i like the metaphor of you being a peach... but that's ...

Well hello this poem is preaty dannnggg amazing! I do want to say that I enjoy the repatition, and it is a very deep poem. Sometimes poems don't really make ...

Welllllll, my number one concern is that there is no title. You could try "I won't let go." Or "I'll melt for you". I also want to point out that ...

I really enjoyed both of these poems! :) I really liked "Escape is (Im)Possible" The best! There is really NOTHING I would fix.

Sounds like dancing/music is very inspirational to you in many ways! Or not. You could just be one of those people who are awesome without personal experience. If so, YAY! ...

Why yes, you most certainly did write a poem! You should probably figure out what it's about, though. Could really use a better title, but that's just my opinion. It ...

I think it's very nice that we never really see what's coming next. At first I thought this was a story about, like, a ghost or something! And then, of ...

I feel like this is written out of anger, on the spur of the moment. It is a very well thought out poem, of cores! -It is easy to relate ...

I like this poem because I feel like you put your soul into it like most writers have to do to become great! I like the repetition, like you were ...

This is a beautiful poem!

I love this poem, it is sooo serious and omninous!