Published September 6, 2012
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Great poem! In my eyes, I can honestly say that I can definitely relate to this because of the strong and bitter emotion of anger that is a symptom of past hurt, humiliation, frustration, etc. I have experienced these things and it hurts like hell to say the least, which explains the burst of anger that was evidently caged in as an attempt to contain the beast within. But of course over time, the longer the beast remains locked up, the angrier it becomes. There are some things that you just have to release in order for a certain level of relief to set in. I believe this was written based off of a real relationship that you may have had and you kept the hurt and bitterness bottled up inside you. So this poem is an outlet of that rage which in most cases I believe is a great way to write a poem. Poetry in my opinion is an art that carries a certain amount of raw emotion and feelings that are expressed in an artistic way. No matter what people say, it will never explain the art of poetry that translates the language of the heart. Great Poem keep writing
To me, it seems like this really was written out of a lot of anger, and maybe that's why the poem isn't that polished. But that very effect right there gives it that raw element, that emotion that you're trying to show to the reader, and it does it very well.
You can tell the narrator is extremely angry at what has happened and just wants to get it all out. The pace is fast, really fast, as though the narrator is trying to get the words out as quickly as possible, like the anger has been there for a while, just bursting to get out.
I would say that the poem does read a little like a rap almost? It just seems like, when you read it out loud and the punctuation drives you to read it faster and faster, that it's almost like a rap.
To me, it seems like this really was written out of a lot of anger, and maybe that's why the poem isn't that polished. But that very effect right there gives it that raw element, that emotion that you're trying to show to the reader, and it does it very well.
You can tell the narrator is extremely angry at what has happened and just wants to get it all out. The pace is fast, really fast, as though the narrator is trying to get the words out as quickly as possible, like the anger has been there for a while, just bursting to get out.
I would say that the poem does read a little like a rap almost? It just seems like, when you read it out loud and the punctuation drives you to read it faster and faster, that it's almost like a rap.
I feel like this is written out of anger, on the spur of the moment. It is a very well thought out poem, of cores!
-It is easy to relate to!
-It is well thought out!
-It RHYMES! (which you would think is not a good accomplishment, I mean we've been doing it since Kindergarten, but this is actually the first poem I've read on here that rhymes... WOO!)