Rurouni

This was interesting. Make sure you use your commas and 'and' right. Such as this sentence, "Get away from her." He growled while never taking his eyes off Ethan, and ...

Oh... This was cool! I like it and I think it's really good. Remember them spaces! This was interesting. A heart on a blood stained string. I would maybe add ...

Ok! Wow! This was interesting! A suicide (victim? is that the right word?) in a mental hospital for the mentally unstable. Pretty interesting. Now, your tenses. I'm going to put ...

OK.. This was interesting. I see your belief, and won't argue. Though I think I won't burn in Dragon's inferno for disagreeing. You believe in Unicorns. The older you get, ...

Oh. I decided to read this! Okay... Pega here. This was really good! I love your writing style, and I can see the characters wonderfully! I love how she is ...

Ok! Number one, I am getting right to the issues because they are screaming at me. 1) In speech, it is written like so, "His name is bob." There needs ...

Ok.. Short is a.... yeah, this was VERY short. Ok, well. I want to see more. And I may not review the next work then.. Yes yes, maybe I will.. ...

Wow. This was really good. I liked this a lot. I love how you transition between the people, and describe these shadow people. It's very good. The title threw me ...

Hmm.... This was interesting. I like it, but part of it has some large paragraphs that make the reader go, "Oh.... Noo.." So maybe format those a little more so ...

Hmm.... This is cool! I could hear it in my head (didn't listen to the video) and I liked how it flowed. Maybe a little longer? Unless there's musical breaks, ...

Okay.... This was pretty interesting, though I don't know if it makes entire sense. He's mad, but satisfied with the info he got.. I don't see that making sense. The ...

Ohhh!!!! Okay.. I've been reading this.. And you put it on a major cliff hanger.... Please... I need more.. So, really only the basic typos... And I want more detail ...

Ohh... Well, this one could have been a little better.. I think you need some commas... Yes commas. Shake is sake.. For the sake of me. Im is I'm. Well, ...

Ok! Pega here again... Man I like this story! Now now.. Here comes the corrections.. Ill is I'll. Unless it's ill. Im is I'm. Shake is sake. Overall, this is ...

Ok, this is VERY short alright... I like it, but there are a few little things. Ethan is very protective of me, he's been in my life even before, I ...