Rurouni

Wow... These are interesting! I came to the conclusion that these might be dreams? Correct me if I'm wrong... I'm not sure how to exactly critique this. So I'll give ...

Very interesting! I like this, and I see it as a metaphor for memories, the coat is fine, then is gets worn. This is a very interesting poem, and it ...

This is lovely! I love your flow in this poem! It's very good and appeals! My favorite stanza is My release doesn't come from the scars on my wrists, 'Been ...

Okay! Interesting! I do have a few little things that could be worked upon.. I should always be capitalized. No matter what. Mmkay? Good. Some of these lines are a ...

Wowie! This is a deep one! I really like this. And I got the sense of people today, we are senseless. And this is a lovely work... I honestly can't ...

Hm... I didn't exactly understand this, nonetheless it's interesting. I'm seeing this as a friendship that is diminishing to nothing. In my opinion, this is all over the place! I ...

Hm.. We all miss people and things, and it's obvious this is about your(?) mother and grandma... I feels first of all, family is everything. Anyways... Maybe you should make ...

This is an interesting work! It makes me think the narrator of this poem is lost in a world of dreams. Maybe you should prop it up into stanzas? Entirely ...

Mmmkay! You requested a review, and here I am to give it! One thing to do Queen, we can ALL see the chapter 2 if you post, and no one ...

Oooh! This was lovely, it had a wonderful flow to it! I myself liked the word choice. Mockingbird, mock me not I just love that line! And then you continue ...

Okay! This was interesting, but it needs one thing: Formatting! Formatting is needed here desperately. When I first saw this I thought it was going to be long, and turns ...

Wowie! This was nice! Awesome! I found a few things that could use a wee bit of work. “It’s evil.” He hissed. She growled. Maybe you should put 'She growled' ...

Ohh... This was interesting, I can see the confusion and frustration in Abe. One thing my amigo, you're introducing this 'romance' a little quick! Anything really to do with Romance ...

Cool! I wanted to read this, I haven't read any chapters by you, and decided to give it a try! How awesome? Pretty Awesome! Okay, this was really good dude! ...

Okay. This was interesting. I've never heard of a fey. Do you mean Fay? Fay means fairy. There is also a Fae. You need to explain that more. And the ...