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Hello scribbleinks! Ruby here from review team Marlins. (: So, to start off I haven't read your prologue just so you know, but I didn't think I had to given ...

Hello, gxldencrxwns! You requested a review from me and I completely forgot so forgive me for that! I don't know what it is about this really short chapter but I ...

Hello, NathanRaux. Wow! I don't know what it is about this poem, but I think that I like it because it can be interpreted in different ways. For me it ...

Hello, EnchantedPanda! I have to agree with Elijah. This work is very complex for such a short piece. I loved the vocabulary words you use. They add depth and desperation ...

Hello, LeviLowe! I don't really have any comments for this except that this really doesn't qualify as a poem to me. There isn't a rhyme, meter, rhythm, or anything that ...

Hello, Lightsong. So this poem for me is kind of off topic in some places like here: I had tried, I really did. My hands were wrinkly from washing the ...

This is really rare to find on this site. I don't think people really bare their preferences to the world of internet strangers. I have done this once, however, so ...

Hello, LeviLowe! First let me say welcome to YWS and I hope you like the site, if you ever need any help I'd be happy to help. (: Anyways, I ...

Hello, Audy! I must say I absolutely adored this, especially since I do some beekeeping myself. I believe you were telling the story from sort of the bees' perspective, and ...

Hello, Virgilius! It's amazing what a lack of sleep with inspire, right? :P First comment is I really liked this. It's different from a lot of poems out there, and ...

Hey, Persistence! I saw your wall post so why not check it out, eh? ^.^ I'm glad I did. It's very funny especially the last few lines! Also was this ...

Hello, SpiritSails! Welcome to YWS! Ruby here as a knight of the Green Room. So, my first question is did you write this? If so, it's very inspirational, but not ...

Hello, Redbox275! Ruby here to review your newly posted work. Haven't seen you around or read anything from you either so here goes. This was very comical, and I can ...

Hello, Nikayla! Ruby here because I read your other poem "cerebrum" and wanted to know what your other poems were like. :D So for this poem, I do have some ...

(: Hello, Nikayla! Ruby here because frankly I only have 14 reviews till my next star eeee! (: Anyways, I'm not a fan of free verse because it usually doesn't ...