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Hey, PancakeandWaffle. I just came here to review your work as you commanded of me. I actually don't have much to say about this because I haven't found any fault ...

Hello, fangirldivergent46. First off I do believe this belongs in other because, it's sort of like a free verse poem but not exactly; and it can't be a short story ...

Hello, XxXTheSwordsmanXxX. It is I again. This part was much more interesting than the last. To me it seems it keeps getting better. Guess I'll have to read more to ...

Greetings, XxXTheSwordsmanXxX. I found the start of your story to be very interesting. In fact, I almost became engrossed, and I wanted to keep reading; but I came tot the ...

I did like this but I thought it could be longer since the title is so long and when you spray perfume the scent is just so lovely. You should ...

Hahahaha, oh my gosh. This was so hilarious. I couldn't keep myself from smiling. The only problem I have with this poem is sometimes the lines are really short and ...

Hey, this was really cool. I was afraid of the dark when I was little. So this is relatable though it is a bit dramatized. That's what you were going ...

Wow, I can't believe you're thirteen. This is rather good. At thirteen I didn't attempt to write. I'd love to read the next part. I was thinking maybe you should ...

Hello, BookOholic. Welcome to YWS btw. I haven't seen you around here before. I enjoyed reading your poem the flow was a little broken here and there but it was ...

This was another great poem. I enjoyed reading it and just like the other poems you wrote, it was well written. The only correction I have is this: You try ...

Hey TheRobster1991. It's me again. I've some to review another one of you well written poems. This wasn't as good as the other two I head but I like it ...

Awwww, this is so sad yet sweet. I don't see many well writing poems about abortion but this was great. I almost wanted you to have some words that say ...

Hello, TheRobster1991. This was so beautiful! I am so excited and glad that there are some more poems about God on here. I really enjoyed reading this and thought it ...

Hey, Keepwriting here again to review this work. I actually reviewed the other version but the way you revised this was so much better than before. But like I said ...

Hey, En101cats. It's me again! :D Anyway, let's review your work. I thought it was really good and the flow was going rather well. When you reached the end of ...