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Re: Being akin to human
Hello, babydollblues. I don't know how to review free verse since a have only written one free verse poem in all my 15 years of life but I thought this ...
Apr 14, 2016 -
Re: Elysium - Chapter 1 [Part 1]
Hello, Elesium. I am finally here to review your work, as requested. This was very amusing. I really didn't want the chapter to end and wanted to continue reading. I've ...
Apr 14, 2016 -
Re: Fear
Hello, Zackymas. Keepwriting here to drop a review in your hand. :D This was rather good. I liked the repeated question, "What do you fear, child?" But let me jump ...
Apr 14, 2016 -
Re: It's Freakin' Spring!
Hey, AliceAfternoon. Cute poem you have here. I was expecting something less poetic since the title is a bit unprofessional because of "freakin'" which isn't a word but it was ...
Apr 14, 2016 -
Re: Rainclouds Over My Church
Hello, CandyWizard and Caterpickle. Keepwriting here with a review for you. I have to say I liked the first half of this, but then I got lost and didn't understand ...
Apr 13, 2016 -
Re: Light Shines Even In Darkness
Hello, Storygirl95. I know you requested a review a while ago but my life's been crazy lately. So, sorry for the late review. I thought this story was so touching. ...
Apr 13, 2016 -
Re: Autumn Trails
Hello, felistia. Keepwriting here to clear out the green room. I didn't find any fault here. It was very pretty. I love the way you describe the disappearance of Autumn ...
Apr 13, 2016 -
Re: Death's Reign: Chapter IV
Hello, AliceAfternoon. I must say I am engrossed in this story but enough said. You've already heard so much praise from me I'll just get into the review. “Please, Norah.” ...
Apr 12, 2016 -
Re: Wonder, Sometimes
Hello, LucytheBrave. Clearing out the green room again! :D Welcome to the site! I know you've been here for a while now but I feel a welcome is in order. ...
Apr 10, 2016 -
Re: An Ode to power
Hello, afghansafi123. Welcome to the Young Writer's Society! Let me first say, I really loved your poem. No one writes in this sort of style anymore. I'm so glad you ...
Apr 10, 2016 -
Re: Prologue
Hello, Sarina Thomas. Just clearing the green room. I see your new to the site! Let me first say welcome! We are very happy to have you as part of ...
Apr 10, 2016 -
Re: To Be a Violist
Hello, clogs. Just trying to review the lonely works in the green room. When I was reading this, I thought of it more as a explanation then a poem. It ...
Apr 9, 2016 -
Re: Magnetic field
Hello, Mahvash. I'm just clearing out the green room! I can't say I liked this poem. I know I'm always so critical but this didn't make sense to me. Instead ...
Apr 9, 2016 -
Re: I'm sorry
Hello, Stardust24. I read this poem and my thoughts were, "I did like this... but I feel like it's missing something." It rhymed her and there but nothing in this ...
Apr 9, 2016 -
Re: Purity
Hello, Sarah12. Just dropping a review at your feet. This was really sad. :( I like purity and this poem as well. I don't really have anything to say about. ...
Apr 9, 2016
