RituparnaBhowmik

this was rather cute a poem Sunset101. its an art to see what is unseen by most, that is what makes you different from the crowd. the poem is well ...

Hey LadySpark, your writing is beautiful, and its awesome. i really liked your thought and the way you built the story up. at first i was quite confused about the ...

as your first work, it is pretty good. i like your dreams and ambitions and how they influenced your work. however, i propose a few suggestions- first of all, use ...

your poem is really beautiful, i mean it. it has an old lyrical touch and modern approach. however i would suggest a few nitpicks - "But you’re a gilded cage, ...

well, as a first attempt it doesn't get much score but hard work could polish it up. first of all you needn't have put the title in the poem again ...

as your first try in writing a sonnet is is appreciable. however, for better works in future i would suggest you some points that you need to improve- "The sunlight ...

the poem opened good, but the pace dragged a little towards the end. i liked your work however i have a set of suggestions- "Their heads are always in the ...

i see some gender crisis here in your poem. through this it is hard to make out which group you fall in. what i write next is purely for your ...

this poem is a good solid piece of art. i suggest you categorize it properly as else it lacks the attention it definitely deserves. i like your thought and certainly ...

this is a good piece and it expresses your heart filled emotions. but i would like to do a few nitpicks however- "mom" in the first line sounds a little ...

wow.. that is a real good piece and you definitely earn a like from me - i am very choosy about this so it is an appreciation. the poem was ...

that was some good encouragement for a broken heart. personally i feel even myself in need of something similar and positive so i felt a good connection to this poem ...

wow your poetry is good. i see that you are a new user so first of all welcome to YMS. you see here we can post our works and others ...

this piece if beautiful. the dilemma is well portrayed. i liked your style of presentation as an inverted triangle slightly tapering at the bast, i guess that is quite symbolic ...

this was something good that i read after long. i liked your thoughts and your simple but distinct words. but for the nitpicks- "in minds to never fade–", i think ...