Renn

Renn here! Wow. Simply... Impressive. You can totally feel the presence of a maternal guide, of something that could have almost been written as a letter to be read after ...

Hello! Renn here. First off, I'll start by saying that I like finished feel to the writing. I see a lot of stuff on here that looks like it was ...

Hello there, sorry I'm like 4 years late to the game. Renn here, and if the name didn't give it away- I'm a bit of a Chronicles of Ancient Darkness ...

Hello there- Renn here. Wow. Just... wow. I was skeptical at first, I won't lie. I expected some heartbroken teenage romance yadda yadda yadda (not that there's anything wrong with ...

Hello there, I'm Renn. I suppose I'll speak for YWS and say that we're very sorry for your loss. First off, I'm going to say it's always very hard to ...

Hello there Prakash, Like Rose said before me, this is exceptional. I can't critique any of the content. I really can't. All I can say is that this topic will ...

Wow. Way to hit people right where it hurts. In an impressive way. It's very easy for poems about heartbreak and love to become cliche very very quickly. Almost instantaneously. ...

Hello there Elysium! I'd like to start by saying I enjoyed the piece, and with it the steady feel of each stanza and the unconventional pattern, as well as the ...

Hello there Chaser! To start off with, I really like your wordplay. Words are so rarely utilized in their truly enjoyable fashion. This is not just to mean rhyming or ...

Hello Speakerskat! To start off with, this was fascinating! I liked the overall rhythm and tempo of the piece. The change in the use of colors to represent time periods ...

Hello there Vikingr! I enjoy your poem (and see no glaring stylistic/grammar/etc. mistakes), but my only question is about the subject. Why is the poem addressed to Freya? Was it ...

Hello there Scribble! I like the pen-name. To start with, I'm going to just copy and give my thought process, and then give my review at the end of that. ...

I like this (and know I'm late in reviewing) but I feel like (if you want to continue refining it) the beginning with her friend and the boy could have ...

As far as an overall feel to it, it's somber and honest and rings true- but I think it could edge on the side of melodramatic (with some of the ...

Huh. I like it. But... There's something... off about it. The rhythm is nice, pleasant if you say it aloud, but I feel like the lines should be longer. It ...