Renard

I like the premise behind this poem. However, for the most part you are in dire need of punctuation. It reads as one continuous thought and it can make it ...

At first, the meaning behind this piece was a little hard to grasp I think. But it hit me here: 'I am a shell. and I am not okay.' This ...

Oooh. I want to disagree with the point you make in the first stanza: 'Definitely not an entire world.' Sometimes, if I am writing a particular work, I want to ...

I read this piece because I am a person that judges myself too unfairly. As I began reading, I was answering your questions in my head. Yes there was an ...

This piece is obviously emotional. The title hints at the theme perfectly. I'm pleased that give you the reader a warning before they read the piece, however, I think the ...

Firstly I have no idea what 'Haruspex' means. So I have gone to Google. Makes sense now. Lurrrvvveely. XD 'But that was exceptionally wanky.' This has got to be one ...

Wow! This is the first work I have seen on here that has actually made use of art. And it's amaze-balls! So impressed and the pictures are so cute, and ...

Hey! The title of the novel caught my attention, after which, your bold opening statement: 'It all started with a lie. And another one. Secrets are the best friends to ...

So, I got incredibly excited upon reading the title. This is one of those works I can tell I have complete faith in the creator (yes you) that you know ...

Heggo. -uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuugggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggh- Ok, I have stopped crying now. This piece is miserable! Also brilliant. 'Once out, she made a run for it. Walking slowly and slowly til

Hey! Firstly, I can totally tell that Taylor Swift has influenced this work: 'Her eyes are teary, Heart? Breaking.' Lulz Anyways... I really liked this piece. It's very expressive: 'Struck ...

Hello! I am here by all means to tear this apart. JOKING! And I would have a hard job, because I really liked it. ♥ I think the language is ...

There is heavy religious imagery present here that really communicates your ideas. 'But God my Father, the True and Holy One.' However, I would refrain from becoming too reliant on ...

Ha ha. You have this massive build up of intensity throughout the piece... it's great because you really manage to lead the reader on. And then your final line: 'In ...

So I fell in love with the title. ♥ Completely agree. I would hate to think that this comes from personal experience, but... I guess that's why it hits so ...