Renard

Hey! This is written in a very irregular way, or at least it seems like that to me 'You sit behind me in a class neither of us cares about ...

Hey! I love essays and I feel you have chosen a very topical issue to comment on here. So. I noticed that you use a very personal tone in your ...

Hey! XD So I didn't exactly get the point of this work. You seem to be promoting this Divy Amin person which makes it difficult to review this as a ...

Hey! XD Yeah, I just wanted to say that this work is me pretty much most of the time. You had my empathy for the work from the opening line: ...

Hey! XD You've got an interesting view on love in this piece. 'There is the attraction, There is my place. ' ~ These ending lines caught my attention for a ...

Hey Yes, I would like an apple pie with that. First off, this is a short work, so you've had to convey you're meaning quicker and you did. With strong ...

Hey XD So this is an interesting work because it comes directly from you and for that reason it reads as very raw. Which is great, because it's honest. I ...

Hey XD You've got the foundation for a really good work here. However, this is so indepth, I don't see why this has to be a prologue and couldn't be ...

Hey! Short works are always difficult to review and this one especially, because I feel like it has a very jokey tone to it, but I'm not sure. So if ...

Hey. Well, this was really miserable wasn't it. It was a really good idea to parody Coldplay, and I can hear the melody in my head as I read. So ...

Heyo again I owe you another review, so here we go. :) I lovvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvve this. Especially when you read it aloud to me and it sounded soooo good. 'Been dying ...

Heyo baby! :D *huggles* I am SO glad that you posted chapter 5 so quickly. I was itching to know what happened and it is brilliant! The dream sequence was ...

Interesting concept. Your title dragged me into this and I was interested to read this work. And give a nice review, of course. 'My first poem was not very good.' ...

Hey baby! XD So, I have been waiting bloody ages for this chapter to emerge, so first criticism is: don't leave it this long next time. :P Now for the ...

Hey! So, you're a boxer. :) If I ca be honest: technically speaking this work is perfect. You could only alter it for the sake of it, but the way ...