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Re: She Gives A Smile
Hey there. I liked what you did. Honestly I didn't exactly understand all of it, but I felt it and that is also important. The parts I really did understand ...
Thu Apr 21, 2016 2:23 pm -
Re: Images of Summer
Hey there, just wanted to tell you that you did a good job. Summer may not be my favorite season, but I can still see the beauty of it. I ...
Thu Apr 21, 2016 2:17 pm -
Re: Blend
Hello there. You did a good job. I almost kind of with it was longer, but since your goal was 20 words... Good job. I understood it very well and ...
Thu Apr 21, 2016 2:09 pm -
Re: ISTAARC/ Science Club's (dull, fup, lame -_-) Meeting
Hey there I saw there was no review for this yet and decided to give it a try. Just to let you know I'm more for being positive and up ...
Wed Apr 20, 2016 6:51 pm -
Re: I Die
Hey there I know this was written forever ago but I like seeing some of the older stuff on here too... haha. Anyways you did a good job. I just ...
Wed Apr 20, 2016 6:48 pm -
Re: I Hate You Mum
Hello there!! I think you did a good job first and for most. I don't think I need to say much to this. Just do the editing everyone recommended and ...
Wed Apr 20, 2016 6:40 pm -
Re: When Crickets Cry
Hey there!! I think you did a good job. You should be proud. I just really liked this. Short stories like this work very well just staying short, because they ...
Wed Apr 20, 2016 6:36 pm -
Re: Giving In
Hey there I think you did a good job. I liked it haha. You really showed emotion in this and that's great. It just needs a little editing, but I'm ...
Wed Apr 20, 2016 4:36 pm -
Re: Fire!
Hey there, I think you did a good job. I agree with @darkmindedemo Show don't tell. Which is funny because we just went through this in my creative writing class ...
Wed Apr 20, 2016 4:31 pm -
Re: My Name Is
Hmm, ok I think this is good. I think maybe you should add more to this though. Go into a little detail? Anyways I also understand it. I think there's ...
Wed Apr 20, 2016 4:19 pm -
Re: Pens
Ok so I really liked this. I understand this so well and I'm honestly going through what she is. I feel her so well. I lost my boyfriend a few ...
Wed Apr 20, 2016 4:09 pm -
Re: Bang
Well... Oh. I was not expecting that. I was reading and thinking oh it could lead to something and then that. I think you did a good job, but you ...
Wed Apr 20, 2016 3:58 pm -
Re: A beautiful love story...
That was so amazing. I almost cried, I'm serious. I loved this so much you did a fabulous job. This story touched my so much I just loved it. Of ...
Mon Apr 18, 2016 6:51 pm -
Re: A journey that none can miss
Hey there this was pretty good. I think you had pretty good metaphors in here. I think you did a good job and should be proud. I really did enjoy ...
Mon Apr 18, 2016 6:01 pm -
Re: An anthology of me
Hey there I think you did a good job, you should be proud. I very much think I can understand this. I feel a lot of the same things. I ...
Mon Apr 18, 2016 5:47 pm
