Reet3103

Hey. Okay so I found one technical glitch, I am sorry because no matter how much generous a human being I try to be" just omit the "much" here. Secondly, ...

Hey. Great poem, it was really nice. I got the whole idea here, this title somehow reminded me of Sia's lyrics. And anyways,I didn't find any glitches as such. Secondly, ...

Hey. Okayyyy, imagery was good. Like honestly, it was something scary for a while. The "beast" here, I don't think that dude was a tad bit scary xD Like, make ...

Hey. Oh god, this is so good. A great topic expressed in a great way, I loved it!! So good! Hats off. This thing got me. The ending, with euthanasia, ...

Hey. This was relatable and good. Honestly, it is something all of us feel like, though I don't think you need to rate it 18+ lol. Secondly, I understand that ...

Hey. The second stanza, first and third line, repetition DID NOT work here. Umm, I don't know if I should take this as a serious poem or a simple kiddie ...

Hey. I don't think this should come in humor, nope nope, I'd expected something funny. This was kinda serious talk. Anyways. I liked the idea, why don't you extend it ...

Hey. WOAH this is great! I mean, I interpreted something else, but it came out to be something else, surprises are so much fun. I loved the theme, the wheelchair ...

Hey. Okay so this was kinda good, I'm late for reviewing I know lol. Anyways, cliche and new at the same time, reminds me of Miley Cyrus, haha. Umm, imagery ...

Hey. Good try. "If you did than you would understand what I'm trying to tell you." I think it should be "then" not "than" here, "When words fail how you ...

Hey. This was something really interesting. Imagery is used effectively here. Though your lines were too choppy (a mistake I usually make) and it didn't go well with the flow ...

Hey. This sounded like such a rap. And I love raps. This was awesome! Realistic, relatable, and true. The words and the flow is quite good. The efficiency of shifting ...

Hey. Okay so, just one technical glitch. "The speak as if a world of emotions slept upon their shoulders. " I think you meant "they" right? A typo, I guess. ...

Hey. Woah, a quilt and such amazing stuff? I think you love the meanings small things convey, good job on displaying it all here. I liked how you changed your ...

Hey. You used a bulb for such a deep content. This deserves an ovation. I loved it, just not the punctuation part :p otherwise it was cool. Good job. I ...