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I like the story so far. When I was first reading it I thought it was about a girl who was delusional about her sickness and I though it was ...

This was so sad.... Honesty I felt the storyline being cliche but still relatable and effective to anybody who couldn't express and admit their feelings to their love interest. I ...

Oh my goodness! This was the cutest and sweet poem I have ever read on this site. I love my mother too and it really touched my heart. I liked ...

I was so excited to read your story and just excited to review. The biggest problem I spot is the lack of description in your writing and that you need ...

I felt like there were some ups and downs to this work. What I did like about it was the wish's outcome. I expected them to just disappear and erased ...

I liked this story. The only character can see spirit's and other superrnatural things is interesting and has a lot fun possibilites. There are just a few things you need ...

Hmmm...I find this an interesting and I wish this would continue into a story. It was writen eloquently and I felt like I had to think about what the narrator ...

This was wonderful work! I loved your descriptions and writing style. It painted a really good picture of the surroundings and your writing really did a great job of portraying ...

Fantastically written! The descriptions and metephors were all very unique and had a lot of orginality. "Juliet has stabbed herself. The wicked witch is dead. The ring was destroyed. All ...

On the technical side of things there are some capitalization and punchuation errors. For example the first line should have a period at the end because it looks like the ...

I definately agree with your writing. There are different types of love from different types of people. I personally don't believe the concept of the "soul mate" but instead I ...

I thought this was an interesting read. I have heard this information before and from how you wrote it I can tell you have a clear understanding on the subject. ...

Seems like it would be a very cute story. Although it's way too short. It's hard to review because there is very little to go on. First, their is no ...

Hey it's redbox and I am going to help get this out of the green room. To be honest it was boring. I think it is okay it is not ...

This is wonderfully heartbreaking and from what I can infer it is about an abusive relationship and how the guy cheats on the narrator. You do a pretty good job ...