Rascalover

Hi! Here to review your lovely, evil, story. I absolutely love the idea of utopian worlds, something far different than the world we live in. I think this is such ...

Hi! Welcome to YWS! I hope everyone has been gracious and you have found everything smoothly! Thanks for submitting one of your first pieces! Having fun reviewing others as well, ...

Hi!! Welcome to YWS; I hope you're here to stay, and that everyone has been kind and you have found everything smoothly! It's an amazing site here full of wisdom ...

Hi!! Thanks for requesting a review! This is a short simple piece, but I'm so curious as to what has happened to Kate. I am going to go through and ...

Hi!! Thanks for requesting a review! I'll do my best to give you some constructive criticism. Let's break it down by stanzas: 1st stanza: I absolutely love the rhyming scheme ...

Hi!! Thank you so much for requesting a review! I'll do my best to give a great review! My overall impression is that I like this poem. I'm not in ...

Hi!! I think this is a really interesting idea. I love quotes, especially ones I can use to describe the life moment I am going through right now. I think ...

Hi!! I love the potential of this piece! Your ability to make it flow and have rhyme is amazing! Here are a few things that might need some work: The ...

Hi!! I really enjoyed this because it was fresh and a new perspective on an old topic. I like the diary feel of this project, and I think if you ...

Hi!! I have yet to read the pieces prio to this, but I really liked this idea of numbering and labeling society into different groups and expelling the inclusion and ...

Hi!! I absolutely loved this! And, welcome to this amazingly, wonderful writing site!! There's really nothing like it, and I hope you enjoy the time you spend on here! I ...

Hi!! This is such a fresh and great idea! I also think you could turn this into a novel or short story based off of your poem, but we'll leave ...

Hi!! This was a really unique piece, and it was refreshing to read! I'm assuming that leaving out punctuation and capitalization is a purposeful move on your part, so I ...

Hi!! This is too sweet. I'm not sure I know who Pankcake is, but now I want to know! I lvd the way you describe this person in your life. ...

Hi!! Thank you so much for requesting a review, and hopefully, I will meet the standards you're looking for. Overall, I think this a unique perspective about winter chasing a ...