Hey! I'm here to review this lovely poem!
I thought that this poem was beautifully written. I think these rhymes could be better since those words are so similar:
"A precious gem thrown away
A forgotten memory in the way"
Away and way are too similar in my opinion. It kind of ruins the flow of your lovely poem.
Also your poem is in need of punctuations but other than that it is fine.
I hope this review was helpful!
Never ever stop writing!
Rachel
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