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You know that moment when you're confused, and then all of a sudden the light bulb goes off and you understand whatever you didn't understand before? Well I just experienced ...

Hello my dear. I like the bluntness of this piece. You didn't mince your words, which can sometimes happen when people try to make their writing sound pretty; however, I ...

Hello lovely! First of all, I would just like to say that I can relate to this 100%. This happens with my siblings and I all the time, and yes, ...

Hello lovely! I'm here to review for you. So to start out, my overall opinion is that this is alright. The reason that it is only alright is because you ...

This is going to be my last review today, so I hope it's a good one. First and foremost, your spaces are definetly helpful when reading the poem. It breaks ...

It's alright. I have two main comments. One, capitalize the first word of every line and use punctuation at the end of each line. Two, this is very cliche. Broken ...

Earlier, I read "Behind the Curtain", and loved it. I decided to look at one of your other works to see if it was as good, and I was not ...

Wow. This planted ideas in my head that I will be thinking about for a while. Your wording is fantastic, and everything written is true. This is really a very ...

I love this, it's really pretty. I do have two critiques for you. One, just remember to put periods at the end of each sentence. It helps the reader know ...

It's a decent start. I feel as though you are simply listing off facts about the plot for the majority of the chapter, there isn't much rhythm throughtout the piece. ...

Hello there dove! First and foremost, welcome to YWS! I hope you love it! And now... the review. It's a great start. I like the different scenario of love. She ...

I really haven't been having the best day today, and reading this just made me feel happy. So thank you for improving my mood. I must first compliment you on ...

Hey dove! While I was reading this, I noticed that you do not state what the war is over. That was a smart move because it adds a level of ...

Hey dove! I like the words a lot. I like how it's a cliche "boy meets girl" scenario but you made it different. The down side of reviewing lyrics is ...

Hello there. Here's a bit of a belated welcome to YWS, but a welcome all the same. First of all, your stanza formatting needs work. Some stanzas have three, four, ...