Raimunda

ARGH! I was reading the comments and like literally shouting at the screen for people to shut up about the imagery! Thish whole poem was full of imagery, what the ...

I think that this is really interesting, and emotional; how the narrator is supremely pissed off and now hates the person she loved so much. It was powerfully written. But ...

Heylooo. So, depressing poem! It's well written though (although the fact that you didn't capitalise your I's made it seemed more rushed and less professional; change ca!) and interesting to ...

Your topic was original and interesting, and it was interesting to see your interpretation. I reckon if I ever tackled this subject I would probably write about how the murderer ...

I had to read it twice because I didn't get it at first, but that's because I'm stupid and not because it's rubbish, because it isn't; it's really good. You ...

Hey emmyc. C'est moi. My favourite things about ta poem. I don't know why I'm writing in french. I'll stop. Oui? Oui. I like the ending of the second verse, ...

Pfftt. You don't need punctuation advice. I used to fly With my wings outstretched I'd soar so high For you were my catch. We have three lines of awesome, then ...

Aww. So short. It's good, but it's just the opening verse of something. Write it more! Expand on your points. How did you disappoint your dad? I'm sorry dad that ...

Aww. Galerius already critiqued so there's no point me even trying. Darnit. But I can say that I don't really agree with the concept. I mean, I used to, but ...

its not enough for you Capital 'I', dear. boys come and boys go Why you no capitalise?? You don't have to, but I think it would suit this poem more. ...

eh WOW. I love it. It's real and relatable and clever and all that schizz. J'adore ca. She looked across to the other table at the group of girls, as ...

I love this poem. It's clever and witty and fast paced and condensed and just overall brilliance. It made me giggle at the end. Im going to nitpick because I ...

Hey I have found my first poem. Since this is my first poem give some nice critique on it. Thank you all in advance. Well. I'll critique it! Ana What ...

I like it. Its unorthodox and refreshing and new and it IS poetry because I've read stuff like this before. And I actually think it's brilliant. "Repetition doesnt emphisize how ...

Tut tut tut. You has done none reviewing. YWSers be not impressed. Anyway moving on to POETRY!!! First thing about this is that its a great start, but it is ...