eh WOW.
I love it. It's real and relatable and clever and all that schizz. J'adore ca.
mnesomeye wrote:She looked across to the other table at the group of girls, as They laughed; People have already said "it shouldn't be a capital 't'..."
played with their glossy,
glued extensions;
complimented each other's luminous, dirty faces,
streaked with paint and powder; J'adore ca expecially. It's clever; like, you're portraying make-up as dirt. Smart much.
stroked labels; I think 'stroked labels' should be in the next verse, as that's the one about clothes.
100% cotton, denim,
underpaid labour.
Stood out in perfect, blatant
conformity.
Then she saw herself.
And cried.
Sigh. I am jelous of this poem. Its really good.
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