please comment! and if you don't like it, tell me, but please don't hurt my feelings it takes me ages to get over that kinda thing... 
its not enough for you
boys come and boys go
but you are always there for me
I love you as a friend
I wish that you could see
but when I look at you I'm so shy
cant formulate a word
so we never really speak eye to eye
because I don't want you hurt
you give me a rose,
say you love me
and I don't know what to say
you ask if we can meet somewhere
can get together some day
and I love you
in my heart I know I do
but its definitely not in the same way as you
love me too
so I say lets stay friends
and you say that that's OK
but I know
and so do you
Its not enough for you
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It's a good poem. It makes sense and its got rhyme and your rhyme doesn't seem forced, which is something that I can't do very well and loads of people struggly with, so hats off old chap. We get the story and we like the poem.
BUT its just that seeing as you CAN write poems, why not pick a different topic? The whole "I-love-you-as-a-friend-but-nothing-more" thing is a Disney Channel storyline. Lets utulise your awesomness more, make more interesting stuff, wow people more.
Because it's not as if you can't.
Awe, it's cute. You did really good on this subject. It's one that anybody can relate to in one way or another. You might want to add some punctuation in there though.
Over all It's a very good poem and you have potential to become a great poet. Keep writing!
I really liked it, I could get the feeling you were trying to pull across. And the short sentences (I think anyway) were done very well.
Okay. I will try not to be too picky, as I usually am. You didn't use complete sentences and most everything written were fragments. It was hard for me to find the pattern of the poem. I liked the topic, but the grammer was not correct. Don't forget to capatalize letters and such. I hope my review helps. Thanks.