Young Writers Society

Thank you, an actual reply and critique instead of some unrelated dribble about standards or some other crap.

Ma'am, I thank you deeply.

The other Ma'am, "This is not Poetry" I swear, say that to your freshman year Language Arts teacher about some of the poetry you're going to read and they will tear you a new one. I'm a Junior and I still keep finding different authors and poets who write in the oddest ways, but I still consider their work poetry because of the obvious difference between a story and a poem. Mainly, A story, is a story; relatively long with characters, deep insight, descriptions and dialogue. A poem is a poem; disjointed, emotional, frank, deep and critical of everything.

There is no set guideline in writing. If there was, many of the authors we cherish today would have had to go and fine something else to take up their time.

Have a nice day, and keep reading.

I like it.

Its unorthodox and refreshing and new and it IS poetry because I've read stuff like this before. And I actually think it's brilliant.

"Repetition doesnt emphisize how something feels but you can say fuck quite a few times in the dark and anyone listening in will get the point. " - I know that this is wrong and rude but it made me laugh.
Not that I understood this at all *PURGES*

And I can sense that alot of people are NOT going to like this one little bit.

Some of the poems are weaker than others, but I found most of them really clever. Its MSN icon/poem, and its definately tackling poetry in a new way. The Gustav Kilmt of the YWS Dramatic Poetry section. I salute you.

xxx

Poetry does have its styles.

This is one of them.

I diddnt put it in the wrong category.

Try reading up on the thousands upon thousands of poetry styles that dont have to do with appropriate stanzas or cohesive make up.

-_-

I'm not acting badly to review, because this wasnt review, this was a question, which I answered.

If you get angry or bothered by this, alright, I dont mean it as anything.

Have a great day, and dont forget to read.

Hey there! Welcome to YWS!
F«irst of all I have to ask: Did you post this on the wrong categorie?
because it seems so.
Poetry has it's style and you have to have stanzas and alot more other things. This right here isn't poetry. maybe try to post it on NON-Fiction or something like that.
Ãnyway, PM me if you have any question!