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Re: How a waitress's smile saved a life
Hey N1K1! Your title is a very catchy one. :) It was a nice story. You have made a good way of narrating this one. As I have glanced other ...
Oct 13, 2013 -
Re: The Diary of a Teenage Mob Boss~Chapter One
Hi mlynch13! :D I like your novel's title: "The Diary of a Teenage Mob Boss". It really hooked me to read your work. Nice one mlynch13! :) I didn't agree ...
Oct 13, 2013 -
Re: Philosophies
Hi Bloodink! :D I just wanna make a simple review with this. :D I like the way you wrote this one. Everything was explained clearly and they are very understandable. ...
Oct 13, 2013 -
Re: Experiences of Teenager
Hi! :) I am here to make a simple review on your essay. I just want to suggest to you to be careful next time with your grammar because I ...
Oct 9, 2013 -
Re: Why do Teenagers link to Social Media
Hi! I just wanna have some review with your work. :) I like your title. Since social media is the most popular among teens, it is very opportune/timely. I just ...
Oct 6, 2013 -
Re: Traveling a Stage in Life
Hi! :) I'm here to make a simple review with your essay! :) "Teenagers are like a ship traveling in the ocean because of its smooth sailing and you are ...
Oct 5, 2013 -
Re: Teenage Management
Hi! :) I'm here to make a simple review with your essay. :) I felt wonderful to read your essay with those good choices of words you put into it. ...
Oct 5, 2013 -
Re: Too demanding?!
Hi! I am just here for a simple review! :D This one is nice! It's really a dope poem. I liked it. I agree with the other comments I have ...
Oct 5, 2013 -
Re: Life is Different Especially when you’re a Teenager
Hi! :) I'm just here to make a simple review with your essay. :) I liked your hook statement. And I also loved the way you have chose and used ...
Oct 5, 2013 -
Re: Teenager's Different Colors
Hi! I'm just here to make a simple review on your essay. :) You know what? I like your title. It made me interested to read your entire article. You ...
Oct 5, 2013 -
Re: Technology: Great Contributor
There are no major mistakes that had been seen in your essay. Simplicity of the words used made your article to be easily understood by everyone. Certain points were properly ...
Oct 5, 2013 -
Re: The Islander
Hi! :) As I have glanced at your title, it made me more interested to read your work. :) It is nice for you to be descriptive in working with ...
Oct 4, 2013 -
Re: The Unveiling of the Disguise
The title is good! It is a catchy one. I like it! I think you successfully delivered to the readers the ideas that you want to share. You have good ...
Oct 3, 2013 -
Re: Technology of life
Be careful on your usage of words. Some statement were not clearly organized making the readers a bit lost on the flow of your essay. I think you should elaborate ...
Oct 3, 2013 -
Re: Expressing Technology
I like the "Lollapalooza!" thing. :) It is nice. You've made good choices in choosing the words you have used in this article. They made your essay brilliant and interesting. ...
Oct 2, 2013