Being a teenager could be quite a tricky process. There are changes that can pose both positive and negative effects. This is due to the physical and mental changes that they undergo. Most teenagers often feel uneasy while in this process; this is because of the sudden changes that occur within their bodies. Biologically speaking, these teenage years are the years where a person’s body mass increase rapidly. Different hormones are also activated within this process called puberty. Mental changes are manifested within the shift of the personality of an individual. It can be said that this is caused by the uneasy feeling that is caused by the rampaging hormones of the human body.
In the adolescence process, a person develops a sense of individuality. Some find this so called individuality within the comfort of peers and other activities, and some find it by being all alone. Many teenagers try to find a sense of purpose by acting all responsible and independent, not knowing that some of their actions make them even look more of a child. Because of their desire to be acknowledged by others, they refuse to listen to what other people have to say. Most teenagers defy their own parents just to have a sense of freedom of their own. They try to look mature by acting like complete adults even though they know nothing of what the real world is and end up making all the wrong choices.
A teenager is usually emotionally unbalanced, they go after something they want so much at a moment, and then end up throwing it away the moment they lost interest. They develop certain insecurities because of the presence of different factors that they compare themselves into. Because of their exposure to the media, they tend to chase after fame and fortune because most personalities in the television display such characteristics. Because of the unpredictable mood swings that occur in a teenager, they become upset with the smallest of conflicts. Their puny sense of moral judgment set their sights on what is worthless and neglect what is truly important, thus creating conflicts within their lives.
Some teenagers find the modern world amusing because of the different things that technology has to offer. Hi-tech gadgets are used to relieve them of their boredom whenever the day seems to go on for so long. Teenagers use different methods to find release in their everyday anxiety, some go to parties, some study their brains off to keep themselves busy, and some even participate in activities that are too awkward to state.
An adolescent’s mind is like a labyrinth full of traps and puzzles; it’s even more complicated than a three by three Rubik’s cube. As much as a teenager wants to be independent, they unconsciously yearn to be guided and be put to the right track whenever things go south. Teenagers often use the phrase, “leave me alone!” and, “I can take care of myself!” but the truth is they always want to have a something to hold on if ever they fail. The capability to enjoy the fruits of achievement without having to face the consequences of failure is what everyone wants in the world and it usually manifests the most during the puberty cycle.
Teenage years can be considered as one of the biggest transitions in the life of a human being. These are the years that usually define who a person chooses to be for the rest of his life. Enjoying the entitled rights without having to worry about their designated responsibilities and duties is one of the most common mistakes that are induced by human nature. Being a teenager, one is usually vulnerable of making these mistakes because they tend to be selfish and immature. But all these can be prevented with the proper guidance. Encouraging them to be a better person, while guiding them in the path that they are currently on, are the main duties of a truly responsible human being. Teenagers might be complicated, but they are not impossible to manage, just keep an open heart and an open mind to forgive their mistakes and support them for the right tings that they make, that is the basic for teenage management.
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i like your essay..
just a comment
Everyone could relate, but i believe also that every teenager could learn from their mistakes. And after that, they could be aware to do those mistakes again..
Heyy Miajaneboo! SapphireFlames to the review!
First of all I liked you're topic its quite relevant to most of the people on YWS (like almost everyone on YWS are teenagers).
You have explained all the aspects related to a teen's life , that's a good point to pick out.
Its well written and also properly formatted.
I liked this part and of course I mention in all my reviews.
''A teenager is usually emotionally unbalanced, they go after something they want so much at a moment, and then end up throwing it away the moment they lost interest. They develop certain insecurities because of the presence of different factors that they compare themselves into. Because of their exposure to the media, they tend to chase after fame and fortune because most personalities in the television display such characteristics. Because of the unpredictable mood swings that occur in a teenager, they become upset with the smallest of conflicts. Their puny sense of moral judgment set their sights on what is worthless and neglect what is truly important, thus creating conflicts within their lives''.
"Teenage years can be considered as one of the biggest transitions in the life of a human being''.
I liked the above sentence very much.
Anyway its a good essay and keep it up!
Good luck!
Have a nice day!
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SapphireFlames
Nice essay.
Hey! Here as requested! I hope I can be of help ^_^
Okay, after reading through your entire essay I must say overall it was quite good. The transitions were smooth which is always good, but your intro not so much. I realize that the title mostly gives it away, but you still need to introduce just what about teens you're going to be writing about in the beginning. You seemed to have some pretty good points throughout this essay, but how can we know they're true and not just personal opinion? I feel like you need to have some sort of statistic that you can relate back to your topic. I saw some typos and parts that didn't really flow as well as they could have, but that's just a matter of the words you used. If I were you I would focus a little more on your credibility for your information so that people know what they read is true. Other than that good job and good luck!
Sushi
Nicely done! Good job with attempting to explain what's going through a teenager and how it affects their life. You cover many different aspects of the topic, and your conclusion ties it together convincingly and offers well-guided suggestions.
I'm going to lay out a couple grammatical things I noticed:
"Most teenagers often feel uneasy while in this process, this is because of the sudden changes that occur within their bodies." Between "this process" and "this is because" you should have a semicolon, not a comma. I noticed this same punctuation error later on, as well; be careful about how you connect your compound sentences!
In the second paragraph, you say teenagers try "acting all responsible." As a rule, you never want to use "all" like this because it is too informal and a little flippant. Same with "so mature" later in the paragraph; "more mature" or even "very mature" would be better.
In general, be careful about small things. If you go through and tighten up whatever you notice like what I pointed out, your entire essay will be more polished- and polished pieces make for convincing ones!
The only other thing I might suggest is completely up to you; it's more a matter of opinion. If you wanted to continue the idea of how to parent a teen throughout, with more than just the valid solutions at the end, you could try to add how the parents/guardians/teachers/whoever will be affected by the trait addressed in that particular paragraph. In other words, bring the adults into it more, as opposed to simply explaining to them why things are the way they are.
Overall, as a teenager I could really relate to your topic! I thought it was very good and definitely closed with something to think about, which was great. With just a little editing, this could be so fantastic! Love it, keep up the good work.
i like your essay, that was informative one, and i like your way on how to organize your topic
keep it up.
Nice essay....
Nice topic...
Good job....
From start to finish you hold on to your topic...
Keep it up!
Good job..
Nice topic...
Nice Essay....
From the start to finish you hold on to your topic....
Keep it up!
Generally, this is quite a good essay. I like your choice of words. I guess, the main conflict is your loss of in-text citations.
Miaaaa.
Shows the different characteristics of Puberty stage. Although, there are some sentences that are needed to be revised. Great source of information. 
Powerful essay. 
Keep it up (y)
Agreed with this one.
Miaaaa.
Shows the different characteristics of Puberty stage. Although, there are some sentences that are needed to be revised. Great source of information. 
Powerful essay. 
Keep it up (y)
Agreed with this one.
Good job. Nice essay.. From start to finish you hold on to your topic. Didnt get lost on the remaining. Reminds me of most situations in our present. Continue to write more and lean on your capabilities author!
Thank you!
Good job. Nice essay.
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Shows the different characteristics of Teenager/Puberty stage. 
Great source of information. Agree with this one. 
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Such a wonderful essay.
Nice essay and it is really a convincing essay! Keep up the good work!
nice ^_^
A very well said essay although there are some sentences that you need to improve to make your essay better.
good job
Very convincing essay! You have really proven yourself to be a writer someday. ^_^ Nice essay You have a nice introduction
Very well said. This essay will surely awaken the eyes of everyone. , You proved and supported your points very well. Congratulations for that.
Very convincing essay! You have really proven yourself to be a writer someday. ^_^ Nice essay You have a nice introduction
Very well said. This essay will surely awaken the eyes of everyone. , You proved and supported your points very well. Congratulations for that.
Hi!
I'm here to make a simple review with your essay. 
I am also looking for your thesis statement. I don't know where it is.
I felt wonderful to read your essay with those good choices of words you put into it. I liked most of the paragraphs you have written. They're nice!
I just found some points where I can give some suggestions.
I like your title but since you gave this essay that title, I think most of the ideas that you must put into your work must be much related with it. It should not be just displayed in that way but must have a role to stand here. Titles were not meant just to attract your readers to read your piece but must have a scent of what your entire article is talking about. I only saw the scent of your title's existence in the last part.
I also saw some grammatical errors. So, you better fix them for it to be easily understood by your readers. Another, do you have sources? If you have, you better put citations to avoid plagiarism.
But as a whole, your essay is good. You better consider the things that almost everyone is suggesting you to do. I know you can deal with those suggestions. Good Luck!
Hope this helps!
-RachelLescano
Nice and True.
Thank you Author.
Very well written...
It's very informative especially to teenagers who are becoming more conscious about themselves and their surroundings.
Nice and True.
Nice essay it actually give a lot of information what is happening to the teenangers nowdays. Nice work keep it up
statistics says they are dramatic, irrational and scream for seemingly no reason. And they have a deep need for both greater independence and tender loving care.
There is a reason this description could be used for either teens or toddlers: After infancy, the brain's most dramatic growth spurt occurs in adolescence.
It has a nice information about what is happening to the teenagers nowadays. keep it up!!! good luck
that essay is nice you made a good work keep it up that is teenagers doing..
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nice work. keep it up!
future writer
This is a very good essay. .I agree with what you said
keep up the good work
This is a very good essay. .I agree with what you said
keep up the good work
It's quite good
Hello, miajaneboo!!
Nice essay, but something that I noticed was defining teenage years at the end of the essay. It is better defining your main topic at beginning of it. Also, avoid the redundant use of words specifically on your second paragraph.
Overall, it was an informative one and keep up the good work!
It was a really nice piece of work, you speak as if you have already triumphed over the conflicts that are caused by being a teenager. These information will be a really great addition to my knowledge index...^_^
i like your essay. it was very nice
Nice one ^^