Experiences of Teenager

by julieanncuasay

Published October 9, 2013

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The best substitute for experience is being sixteen. Experiencing a lot circumstances during teenage period is a laughable to reminisce. Some of us say that experience is the best teacher. We can learn lesson from our good and bad experiences which also helps to enhance our personality. Every moment in our daily activities we can encounter different experiences. Sometimes those experiences are the things that we don’t just need but we want to complete our satisfaction in life. Being involve into troubles is a common situation faced by many teenagers. But most of the experience that a teenager wants to happen will be beyond the country, where they can feel their independence. As well as having a special someone or getting into a relationship. Not all experiences are good and we like to remember. In other hand experience could be a nightmare. For example getting high because of drugs and being raped. Teenagers are the common victims of these immoral activities. Likewise in being involved in criminal case. This might affect the emotional, mental and health condition of the one had been abused. The process of moving on is not easy usually when there are scars or markings had been left but then, those bad experiences they had can be cure by the professional people. As you can see teenagers are very conscious and wanted to explore many things but hey are lack of being responsible and being aware in the environment. Experience in teenage period has three types: the positive, negative and challenging experiences.

In school every teenager wanted to get high grades and be a good example to their fellow classmate. They were easily to influence through the help of friends to study harder. Having a goal in school, winning in the competition having medals and other achievements is a kind of experience something to be proud of. Developing skills in early is much better to a teenager to boost her confidence. Talents at early age can be enhancing while growing up. Thorough those achievements a teenager can easily make friends to his environment.According to Cassey, 2006 "great achievement" in life could lead to popularity where your creation are very unique .Creating good memories with friends are one of the most memorable stories in our life. But those good memories can only experience with your true friends. You can find your true friends when you are in a complicated situation and they are still there to help you. Keeping good attitudes, goal in life and continue achieving dreams are the characteristics that a teenager must have.

There are some stories that a teenager cannot keep those kinds of characteristics because of involvement in a broken family. If a teenager experience having a step mother or father sometimes they are not willing to replaced their biological parents. Because of that they cannot focus in their studies and they get fail grades. Focusing in studies is hard to apply once a teenager is suffering in a broken family. Sometimes they get to the point that the bully others just to have fun. Bullying is a condition where teenager expresses their anger to others. This kid of action is an effect of having a broken family. Also getting high in illegal drugs can affect the social life of a teenager said Andrite, 2011.

Youth are very adventurous and yet they want to challenge as well themselves. Teenager loves to travel but on the other side they are scared of travelling alone. Because they face difficulty in the environment. “Teenagers encounter prejudice and racial discrimination because they are different.”(challenges faced by the immigrants par.1) (Curti,2008) . Traveling is such a challenging experience which also helps a teenager to boost his confidence and be socialized with other people. Where they can gain more knowledge or learn lesson to the places they had stayed. Life without rules of parents but has limitations base by you is being independent. Even in school we encounter challenges like competing to those who are ahead on us and that’s give the situation more complicated. The eagerness to prove that even they are ahead teenager cans till won in the competitions compare t others. Characterize this stage of life is complicated.

In school every teenager wanted to get high grades and be a good example to their fellow classmate. There are some stories that a teenager cannot keep those kinds of characteristics because of involvement in a broken family. But even they experience it. Youth are still very adventurous and yet they want to challenge as well themselves.

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ajruby12
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ajruby12 wrote a review Review · Oct 9, 2013

Hey! ajruby12 here for a quick review!
Ok, one really bad problem was grammar. The numerous mistakes made it very difficult to read. Also, punctuation wasn't clear either. If you could fix those things, it'd make it so much easier to read! So you might want to carefully check over all that yourself or even ask someone to proofread it for you. (It won't hurt!)
Keep writing! :)

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Nanethpunzalan commented Comment · Oct 9, 2013

great job! Keep on writing. :)

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miajaneboo Comment
miajaneboo commented Comment · Oct 9, 2013

Nice essay :)))!

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RachelLescano wrote a review Review · Oct 9, 2013

Hi! :) I am here to make a simple review on your essay.

I just want to suggest to you to be careful next time with your grammar because I have found some grammatical errors. Words within every sentences must be properly organized so readers can understand it clearly. By doing this, I think you can produce a better and more pleasant work.

Another, it's better if you could use transitional devices between ideas when you want to have a bit of shift from one idea with the other. It could make the readers guided on how the flow of your essay is going on. But make sure that these ideas are still connected in some way. :)

In conclusion, I suggest for you to add more details on this part and don't just directly restate the topic sentences from second to fourth paragraphs. It seemed that you just copied those topic sentences and I think it is not too effective to end up your essay.

You may work on these simple suggestions for the next writing you will have. But to sum up it all, I know you have a point on your article. Teenagers' most common experiences were cited here where every teen who could read it may feel related with.

Good job! Just be careful next time. :D

Hope this helps! :)

-RachelLescano

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Chairazell commented Comment · Oct 9, 2013

Nice essay. Keep it up :)



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