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Re: Feeling free to write.
Hi MoonIris! This is such a sweet poem and I truly love it! I feel like I can personally relate to this poem as I too love to dream and ...
May 6, 2020 -
Re: My Sister, The Butterfly
Hi bpmzcpl! I loved this poem, it is such a sweet tribute to your sister. You gave many beautiful descriptions of who your sister is and utilized many literacy devices ...
May 6, 2020 -
Re: a flower with promise
Hi fraey, I love this poem. It has beautiful and vivid descriptions. I can clearly picture this rose in my mind. I really like how you wrote about it when ...
Mar 3, 2020 -
Re: We can end poverty
Hi thegoldenbird, Wow! I really love this poem. It has such a powerful message and was written very beautifully. I really liked how you wrote a story of a typical ...
Mar 2, 2020 -
Re: The Ball Keeps on Rolling
Hi Horisun, I really liked this poem. It's very different than any poem I have read before. It's more lighthearted but I like that you wrote about sports because you ...
Mar 2, 2020 -
Re: The Words Come Back To Bite
Hi Horisun, I really enjoyed reading your poem. I love how the poem is short but yet has a full, developed, impactful message. I think it's really great because it ...
Mar 1, 2020 -
Re: On The Beach
Hi Niteowl, I really enjoyed reading your poem. I thought that the imagery was excellent and the message was powerful. I love how you related your feelings to a beach ...
Mar 1, 2020 -
Re: 12 rain
Hi SunsetTree! Queenie here for a quick review. For starters, I LOVED this poem. It was so tragic and yet so beautiful. This poem is extremely well written, so good ...
Apr 28, 2018 -
Re: Serendipity
Hey Namjoon2003, Queenie here for a review. For starters, I really liked this poem because it described love very well and it is a poem that many can relate to. ...
Apr 28, 2018 -
Re: The Sickbed
Hi LeutnantSchweinehund, Queenie here for a quick review. For starters, I really enjoyed reading this poem. I thought that the imagery you incorporated in your poem was really good and ...
Apr 13, 2018 -
Re: The Five Emotional Lives of cats
Hi Katnes, Queenie here for a review. First of all, I really enjoyed reading your poem partly because I too am a cat lover. I liked how each stanza depicted ...
Apr 13, 2018 -
Re: Away and Gone
Hi PeijiRestoration. It Queenie here for a review. For starters, I really enjoyed reading your poem. I found it very interesting how you wrote it so that you could read ...
Apr 6, 2018 -
Re: untitled
Hi SunsetTree! Queenie here for a review. First of all, I really liked your poem and I think that it is one that carries with it a message that is ...
Apr 5, 2018 -
Re: *Dublin breeze*
Hey Gina! Queenie here for a review. So, first of all I really enjoyed your poem. It kind of reminded me of some folktales. I really liked your use of ...
Jul 14, 2017 -
Re: The Raging Storm
Hey LittleLee, it's Queenie here for a review. For starters, this is very good for your first poem. I like how you made your feelings parts of the storm. I ...
Apr 30, 2017
