I do not care that this was posted awhile ago I need reviews and I mean, come on now Lee, its one of your poems, I can not not review it! So, lets get started!
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Hello, E.E here for a possibly quick review and maybe some utter nonsense! Grim is here as well, drinking hot cocoa and being a slacker. *Grim looks over, glaring* So, lets get started.
Firs thing i notice is that.. well nothing! It flows very well and my favorite line, well lines, would have to be "The stormy sea gets ever rougher, And the Devil grows even merrier." IT really punches you, makes the whole poem come together. The only thing I would have to add is that the top line, bold it and make sure to put that it is an authors note so that people don't get confused over it.
Now is when I dissect your poem and see if I can't get its meaning right! So, in your poem you are telling us, the reader, that you are suffering. But you wish it would leave, oh so badly you wish it would leave. And you keep falling, the monster happy to oblidge.
Overall, I loved the poem and keep up the good work! Happy Thanks- WAIT, MERRY CHRISTMAS, I CAN SAY THAT NOW! OR HAPPY HANUKA I really need to go now Grim has souls to reap and he needs more cocoa. He has a problem, seriously. Cheerio and fruit loops to you!
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