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Re: Stolen Innocence
Hey there! How are you? Purple here to give you a review! Let's get down to business. This is an amazing poem with an intense theme and strong imagery. I ...
Feb 21, 2014 -
Re: Sandcastles
Hey there! Purple here to give you a review! Now, let's get started This was such an alluring poem to read, just wow. I have to say my favorite part ...
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Re: Candle-lit Eyes
Hey there! Purple here to give you a review! Let's get down to business :) I really like the imagery in this poem. It flows nicely and I can see ...
Feb 21, 2014 -
Re: Paths
Hey there! Purple here to give you a review! Let's get down to business This poem has a lot of personality and descriptive imagery. It could apply to love or ...
Feb 21, 2014 -
Re: She's Drunk
Hey there! Purple here to give you a review! Let's get started :) First off, I LOVE YOUR GIF/PROFILE PICTURE IT IS GLORIOUS Ahem. Anyway, this is such a lovely ...
Feb 21, 2014 -
Re: Russian Roulette
Hey there! Purple here to give you a review! This is a very intriguing poem that immediately caught my eye. Just a few grammatical errors I noticed. "now that your ...
Feb 20, 2014 -
Re: I am all but able to live.
I definitely got the emotion in this poem. Just a few suggestions. In the fourth line, decide between "but they aren't beating" or "yet they aren't beating" because yet and ...
Feb 20, 2014 -
Re: Story of A Life
I absolutely adore this poem. How we are books and stories hidden from the others was very descriptive and relatable with excellent imagery. All of us only know as much ...
Feb 20, 2014 -
Re: Love
This is actually kind of cute. It's not exactly too romantic but its suitable for this hallmark holiday. Along the lines of literary techniques: there was a scattered rhyme skeme. ...
Feb 20, 2014 -
Re: The Affair
This is such a strong piece just fantastic. First off, I actually love the blaming tone that this poem has. Usually something like this requires some care as to not ...
Feb 20, 2014 -
Re: Write the writer
The deep longing I immediately got after reading this was extraordinary. At first, I assumed this would be such a plain and short poem. I quickly realized my error. It's ...
Feb 20, 2014 -
Re: Razor Blade
This has a lot of potential and I actually enjoyed reading this (despite the somber tone). I like how the poem progresses from an innocent child to the deathly potential ...
Feb 19, 2014 -
Re: Watching Love
This was a really compelling read. I have to say my favorite lines would be "He watches you dance, And leans in to memorize your motion". A lovely and heartbreaking ...
Feb 19, 2014 -
Re: Times
Time is definitely a beautiful subject to write about. You could say this poem is not about "time" as the broad subject that is, but more "what time does". The ...
Feb 19, 2014 -
Re: Here's to
This piece has lots of descriptive wording and interesting literary choices. Some other reviews I saw commented on your capitalization and order of words, but i disagree. In fact, the ...
Feb 19, 2014
