-
Re: With(out) You
Hi there! I'm here to review this piece of poetry. Let's begin. Although this is categorized under poetry, I would not call it such. This seems like more of a ...
Jan 3, 2016 -
Re: on waiting
Hi there! Purple here to give your poem a review. Let's get started, shall we? Up until the word "still" I sort of liked where it was going. This, to ...
Jan 3, 2016 -
Re: school days
Hey there! Purple here to review for you. I like this subject matter and this female perspective associated with idolizing appearance. As a fan of repetition, I also like your ...
Nov 6, 2015 -
Re: Gold
Hey user Purple here, So this is obviously a non-traditional type of poem. I think, overall, I understand what you're trying to say. However, your wording and change of subject ...
Nov 6, 2015 -
Re: A House's tale
Hey there! Purple representing the Black Nights on this wonderful Review Day! Let's get down to business. I have to say, with the subject and your unique writing style I'm ...
Nov 30, 2014 -
Re: Breathing.
Hey there! Purple representing the Black Knights here on this wonderful review day! Let's get down to business. Okay first thing's first, I LOVE your icon. Secondly, the last two ...
Nov 30, 2014 -
Re: This Madness
Hey there! Purple representing the Black Knights on this wonderful review day! Let's get down to business. I love some of your use of vocabulary in this piece such as ...
Nov 30, 2014 -
Re: No more
Hey there! Purple here to represent the Black Knights on this wonderful Review Day! Let's get down to business. While I love your perspective on souls (and whether their meaning ...
Nov 30, 2014 -
Re: An Average Daybreak
Hey there! Purple here on this lovely end to November's Review Day! Let's get down to business. Your writing style in general really sticks out in multiple ways in this ...
Nov 30, 2014 -
Re: Augustus Riley
Hey there! Purple here to give you a review! Let's get started. So, this was an odd short story to say the least. I would strongly advise you to take ...
Nov 17, 2014 -
Re: The Warrior
Hey there! Congrats on your first poem! So I do have a few suggestions but they're actually not /too/ necessary and only things to keep in mind when writing poetry ...
Nov 14, 2014 -
Re: It's Him
Hey there! Purple here to give you a speedy review! Let's get started. I think we being the reader have all been in a place where we feel like this. ...
Nov 5, 2014 -
Re: Disordered in Love
Hey there! I haven't reviewed in a few months but I've chosen to attempt with yours haha. Let's get started. So, I'm personally not in a good place right now ...
Nov 5, 2014 -
Re: Fullfilment is empty
Hey there! Purple here to review for you! Let's get started. First and foremost, I've noticed a lot of things in your 'writing style' that actually get in the way ...
Aug 6, 2014 -
Re: Seven Sins In My Home
Hi there and happy review day! Purple here to deliver for Salsa Verde! Let's get started. I absolutely love this poem for the gritt and the blunt ways of delivering ...
Jun 29, 2014
