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I really don't want to review this because I know this came from a special place, but its our job. It starts out depressing, but slowly turns lighter, I like ...

I liked the story but you have a few grammar problems. You also have tense changes in a few sentences too. What I really liked was how, instead of telling ...

I'm just going to list off what you can improve. -grammar -format -rhyme scheme (didn't look like spoken word to me) -punctuation - and what lechat said, some of the ...

Straight to the point and blunt, maybe good for some other poems, but not this one. I like the poem, but I feel you could have reeeeeeaally fleshed it out, ...

its a great poem, but it seems like the story was not meant for this format. What I'm saying is I think this would be a lot better if you ...

I can sort of grasp what your trying o get at, but their are many things that need to be clarified. One of the biggest challenges for a lot of ...

Ah, well that was a sad poe-------- oh god, its the return of the happy death poems!! So the start of the poem/spoken word/whatever was fine, it portrayed a person ...

Although I'm not Christian, Catholic, Baptist, or other, This feels like it was made from something holy and close toy our heart. I like how you describe God and the ...

I love the concept of this, but i'm not sure if its a real story. The makings of a story include characters, plot, conflict, and resolution. You have some of ...

meh, i never do review day anyway. Hey i really like this story, but is this like the very beginning of it or was there a chapter or prologue before ...

Er, I think you're mistaking the meaning of anonymous. Anonymous doesn't mean just one person, Anonymous represents vigilantes for the people, but not necessarily with the people. And usually, acts ...

If I believed in God life would be a lot better for me. Many people believe in god because they need that holy unspoken power to rely on. "If god ...

Please apply sunblock to burned areas. Waiter, you've just been SERVED! Such an awesomesauce poem embracing the "hipness" of today's society. I love that you can explain so much in ...

*Choke. If I were five i'd throw up. (That's not a put-down.) Wow, what a way to go. Forgive me if I got the wrong idea, but is this person ...

A very emotional, beautiful poem about...who? What? I'm not sure if it's a fight against bulimia or just the flu. Either way, it evokes the deep fears and terrors in ...