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  • Poetry » Other, Lyrical Re: Because Haters Will Only Hate, Forever.

    Heya Maroonamorous! I've popped by for a quick review! So, first off, I give you a round of my super-special applause for this bit: Pull me out, pull me out, ...

    Jan 5, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Frozen Tears

    Heya MysteryMe! I've dropped down from the world of cherry sparks and volcanic twisters and am here for a review! So, anyway, I'll start off my saying how I absolutely ...

    Jan 5, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: The overdue judgement

    Heya Mystique! Pompadour here for a review! OK, so first off, I absolutely love the general idea behind this poem of yours! I liked how you showed revolution as triumph, ...

    Dec 30, 2013
  • Poetry » Health, Dramatic Re: Anastasia Loves You

    This is absolutely beautiful! Really, I don't know what to say. The layout of your poem is so artistic; the verses seem to speak for themselves and twirl the sinews ...

    Dec 26, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Paradise.

    Heya Sushi! ( I used to have a cat called Sushi, but that's irrelevant so...) Review time! OK, so I agree with Infinity that this could use a bit of ...

    Dec 25, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Merry Christmas

    I love this.

    Dec 25, 2013
  • Poetry » Narrative, Dramatic Re: Who Says Boys Can't Cry

    Hi Holly! I've popped over from the mystical land of chocolate and alligator boomerangs and am here for a quick review! So my first impression was: Oh my gosh this ...

    Dec 25, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: The Evening Leave

    Hello ocw2021! Pompadour here for a review! So, first off, I love how you execute the imagery in this poem! Very nice. I also really like how you end the ...

    Dec 23, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The Garden

    Heya, ChynaRyder! Let's get cracking, shall we? OK, so I liked the tone of the poem, and how you presented the idea that gardens are meant to be paradise to ...

    Dec 20, 2013
  • Poetry » Fanfiction, Dramatic Re: The Spark

    Hey there, Abigail! Hunger games, eh? I loved the first two books! ( Don't get me started on the third one or it'll lead me towards a mini-rant. -_-) Anyway, ...

    Dec 17, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: and so, I walk through a door...

    Hey there! Pompadour here for a quick review! I'm sorry if I'm not coherent in places, but it's been a long day so forgive my light-headedness, yeah? OK, so first ...

    Dec 14, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: First Snow of the Year

    Hey GreenTulip! Pompadour here for a quick review! Ok, so I liked the way you presented the scene to us and how we could sense the atmosphere; it was almost ...

    Dec 8, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Literature Re: The Feeling

    Hey Emotion1405. :D Pompadour here for a review! So, first off, I'll start with how I absolutely loved the way you ended this piece! It was short, striking and so ...

    Dec 7, 2013
  • Poetry » Narrative, Dramatic Re: Unbidden

    Hey ForgottenSpellbinder! Pompadour here for a review! OK, so I get that you had a problem with the spacing, so you might want to try and press "SHIFT+ENTER" for a ...

    Nov 22, 2013
  • Poetry » Narrative, Lyrical Re: only a book, only life

    I love this poem! It really makes sense, and it ... HIT me. You know how some words manage to strike you until you feel like your heart's crying? Yeah, ...

    Nov 22, 2013


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