Pompadour

Hello there Aurora99! Pompadour here for a quick review! OK, so first off, I found the beginning of this chapter rather intriguing. And, I must admit, that is one of ...

Hello there, Deanie! Here for a quick review! To be honest, this story is really awesome. It's very detailed, and not too fast-paced. The dialogue is natural and fun. And, ...

Heya Timmy! I've finally popped by for a review! ( Sorry for the lateness. School's just knocking the wind out of me. >.< ) OK, so first off, this has ...

Why hello there Laure! I'm sorry for the late response, but I'm finally here to review! :D OK, so I found this chapter much more interesting than the last! But ...

Hey Fiendy! I've popped over for another review! So I was attracted to the poem by the title which, I have to admit, really managed to catch my attention! I ...

Well, this is really good! I like how you talked about "individuality lost." And you touched a very real subject: wanting to fit in and be noticed, the importance of ...

Whoa. OK, so I thought I'd review one of your works since you appear to be on a reviewing spree, and I thought, "Hey, the reviewer deserves reviews too!" So, ...

Heya Spammy! I saw you'd posted a part three of this, and since I hadn't even read part one, I thought I'd drop by and review! And I must say, ...

Heya dangerdanger! Welcome to YWS! I've popped over for a quick review, so let's get cracking! First off, I really really like the idea behind this piece! A writer's mind ...

Hey there, fictional! I'm here for a quick review! OK, there's not much to be said except that I really enjoyed reading this! The flow of the poem was brilliant ...

Heya loveinblue! Pompadour here to review for you! OK, so I'll start with the general idea which is really good, but I feel like it's a little ... underdeveloped. I ...

Heya timmyjake! Pompadour here has dropped from the violent world of magical binders and cake to leave a review on your poem! Now, I'm very cheery today, so I shan't ...

Heya TTYF ( A.K.A Fiendy. ;) ) I'm here for a review! OK, so I'll start off by telling you that I love the idea of a watercolour winter! It's ...

Heya Laure! Pompadour here has been aroused from the land of fruitcake and gelato and is here for a review! (Don't ask me why I said that in third-person. I ...

I loved this piece! It struck my heart's chords and played with my feelings perfectly! How you talked about life as a patchwork quilt, I found myself comparing our every ...