PixieStix

Hey, Katie here to review~ Honestly, I don't think that thic could be lyrics. It might just be me, but being a songwriter/singer, I know that lyrics are literary that ...

Wow. This is very dark and mysterious, but it has some potential. I like how you described some stuff in detail, how the narrorator believes that it was a dream ...

Hey, Welcome to YWS, and I'm glad to review your work. This has a lot of potential, and I believe that you have based this story of of true events, ...

Wow. I'm Pix, and this peice is just...terrific. I love how you expressed emotions in here,and love how some of the words had an 'y' at the end of the ...

Hey, it's Pix and I'm here to review~ I absolutely love this poem. And you're think I could never write this good. I love it. I love the title to. ...

This is a very good peice of work! I believe you should keep writing more, and more, and maybe create the story you're trying to tell with this into a ...

Hi, Antonio! I thought this sounded more like a love note. :3 And I love those. Okay, but back to reviewing! At the beginning, I thought the narrorator was trying ...

Whoa~ This poem was very intersting! I love how you started out with the tick-tock in the beginning of every sentence or shyme! This is a very good poem, very ...

Embers! I'm your reviewer today. This is a very interesting peice of work. I agree with Dems though, that I enjoyed it but it was distressing, but you did a ...

Wow! Epic, this peice is very good. I think that this peice has some very good potential and maybe to get this peice even more stars, you can add more ...

Hm. Very interesting peice you have here. I don't really like the format in which you've put it in though, and the slashes don't make the poem clash together like ...

Hey, Pixie here to review. I haven't reviewed work in such a long time and i think that this peice actually has some potential in it. I honestly believe that ...

Oh my god. I really, really love this. Peter Pan, yo. S'amazing. I love the detail you've put into this peice, and I'm a sucker for remakes of stories, and ...

Hello Writ! I'll be reviewing this for you. I really like the message you gave out in this, and I think this has lots of positive potential. There's not much ...

Rocky! I shall review this for you. :) I like this..alot. It really brings the reader in, and I think that's what you want in a prologue, right? This was ...