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Hey, I saw this and the title caught my eye, and I decided to review it. If you have any questions PM me or leave a comment on my wall ...

Here I am, as promised! Sorry I was so late to get here, I was quite busy with school. ;) Anyways, I overall liked the theme of the story. Although ...

Ok, overall it's ok, but I have a few things to say. First with the good. I like the repetitive usage of the phrase "me and my gun." It helps ...

Sounds good to me :) Well, for starters, I like it because it is calming in a way, not too much action, not too much dullness, which is why it's ...

I'm a guy, so I can't really see through a lady's perspective, but I still like it. I like the narrative view. I also like how it explains what you ...

Cool :) It's simple, but I like it. I think you could probably add a bit more to it, though.

It is sort of depressing in the way, but I like it, in the aspect that you want to make yourself a better person.

I like the general idea, but I would change a few things. Here is the poem in my revised way(reworded and fixed a few grammar thingers): "She has curly hair ...

It's so true though, I sometimes wander into a pole and then I get foolish glares from every single being who witnessed my mishap. Everything was clear and made sense, ...

Wow, it actually nails 90% of my issues :D It rhymes well in most places, and not much grammar to fix, mainly because it's a poem. Here's my favorite stanza: ...

I really liked this. It totally captures the feeling of falling, but in a different explanation or perspective, I guess. The word pairs and choices were great, so nothing really ...

Wow! That was great! I recently had a quick class in Language Arts on Charles Dickens, so I understand where you come from. I can bet he's not just an ...

* clap clap clap * Good job! The message was very clear, and I'm sure that it's about that you can't be afraid to speak your thoughts, and stand up ...

Awesome job! I like how each word had a unique and simple definition, I think it really added to the poem! The vocabulary range was also excellent. Keep it up!

I like the repetition in the poem. I liked it, even though I'm not the biggest poem guy myself. I thought it was simple and easy to follow, and I ...