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Very nice, you made it specific and to the point, so I wasn't wondering what it was about. That is probably one of the tough parts to overcome when it comes to writing poems. I like the topic you chose as well, nicely done, I like it.
This is really good! I like it
* clap clap clap *
Good job! The message was very clear, and I'm sure that it's about that you can't be afraid to speak your thoughts, and stand up for what you think is right.
I think that a part sounds a bit odd, and that's right here:
"Not honoring as we ought,
Not caring enough,
Not loving another,"
Did you mean to put, "not loving one another" or was it meant to be that way?
Anyways, I think it was good. Keep it up!
Thanks you guys @Ninja, oops thanks for noticing that error, I miss out "loving one another" when I was typing it up. Thanks!